<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi Maria,<div><br></div><div>here's a redline markup for you all to take a look at. i love your draft and don't disagree with anything in it. i'm trying to amplify and refine. feel free to back out anything that puts you on edge.</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html>