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<div>Well, I started to mark up the text, but quickly realized that the entire paragraph focused solely on the dangers of focusing exclusively on elapsed PDP time. </div>
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<div>Perhaps a clean way to salvage this section would be to include an introductory sentence or two that captures my concerns below. How about we prepend something like this to the section:</div>
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<div>“In practical terms, the average time to complete a PDP represents a barrier to participation and undermines the ICANN model. The multi-year effort to participate in a PDP is a commitment that individuals often can’t afford and commercial organizations
cannot justify. And the anticipate elapsed time makes the PDP an unattractive mechanism for addressing urgent or controversial matters, and provides incentives for parties to escalate these immediately to other structures, such as the Board or GAC."</div>
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<div>Thoughts?</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><Gomes>, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Tuesday, December 10, 2013 at 13:07 <br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>James Bladel <<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">jbladel@godaddy.com</a>>, Maria Farrell <<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com">maria.farrell@gmail.com</a>>, Mike O'Connor <<a href="mailto:mike@haven2.com">mike@haven2.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>"<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>RE: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">James,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">It sounds like you are in agreement with the sentiments you flagged but would add some to them. In my reading of the comments I understand them to
be saying that PDP measurement shouldn’t focus so much on time that quality is sacrificed and you seem to say the same thing, i.e., “</span><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">the future of the BU/MSM is entirely
dependent upon a PDP that is timely —and– results in quality outcomes”. If I am correct, how would you change the current wording?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>James M. Bladel<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 10, 2013 1:58 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Maria Farrell; Mike O'Connor<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">I support this version of the draft, except for the sentiments contained in the section regarding making the PDP more time effective.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">While I don’t dispute that elapsed time for a PDP is only one (among several) measure of the overall quality of the process, I strongly believe that in the
“real world,” the slow pace of the PDP is a threat to the PDP, the GNSO and even the ICANN model itself. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">This isn’t just alarmist thinking on my part — the multi-year average TTL for a PDP represents a significant barrier to wider participation from volunteers
(who can’t afford the commitment) and commercial organizations (who cannot justify it). It also provides a clear incentive for governments and other interests to seek faster paths to advance their agendas through ICANN, ensuring that urgent or controversial
topics will immediately escalate to a Board/GAC interaction.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">In my opinion, the future of the BU/MSM is entirely dependent upon a PDP that is timely —and– results in quality outcomes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Maria Farrell <<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com">maria.farrell@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, December 10, 2013 at 10:41 <br>
<b>To: </b>Mike O'Connor <<a href="mailto:mike@haven2.com">mike@haven2.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">These changes look great to me, thanks a million.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We have an agenda item on this on Thursday's meeting, and a submission deadline on Friday.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">All the best, Maria<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">On 10 December 2013 16:31, Mike O'Connor <<a href="mailto:mike@haven2.com" target="_blank">mike@haven2.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">here's a redline markup for you all to take a look at. i love your draft and don't disagree with anything in it. i'm trying to amplify and refine. feel
free to back out anything that puts you on edge.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Here are some draft comments on the ATRT2 recommendations re. the GNSO.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Mikey and David - I know you two kindly volunteered to help out with this. Can you particularly take a look?
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Also, there's a need for a para or bullet point list summarising relevant work the GNSO is already doing, e.g. the SCI? or Staff
paper on improving the PDP? I'm drawing a blank on the other initiatives. Can someone please rustle up a list of them?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">This needs to be submitted by the 12th, so comments please ASAP.
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<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Dear members of the Acountability and Transparency Review Team (2),<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">The GNSO Council thanks you for the outcome-oriented analysis and recommendations in the ATRT2 Draft Recommendations of 21 November, 2013. We particularly appreciate the time
and care that went into these recommendations, the commissioning of useful research and, especially, the efforts made by the ATRT2 and its leadership to promote awareness and dialogue about the recommendations at the Buenos Aires meeting.
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<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">The Council’s input focuses on recommendations regarding the GNSO PDP. Broadly, we strongly support the call for broader and more active working group participation and earlier
involvement of the GAC, and will work hard to implement final recommendations on these issues.
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<p><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">New recommendations arising from issues not addressed by ATRT1 Recommendations</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="text-indent:.5in"><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.1 on developing funded options for professional facilitators to help GNSO PDP Working Groups</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">While some Councilors supported this suggestion, others were concerned that facilitators may not always be appropriate in the multi-stakeholder model. Broadly, we believe this
is an option that could be considered in the context of the ATRT2’s recommendation to develop explicit guidelines for when to use facilitators. Agreement should be elicited by Working Group participants to use facilitators on a case by case basis, and with
a clear understanding of facilitators’ roles. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="text-indent:.5in"><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.1 on face to face meetings during GNSO PDPs</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We support this recommendation and the development of guidelines for when F2F meetings may be required and justified. However, we do note that there is a variety of ability
amongst Working Group participants to travel to F2F meetings. Many volunteers cannot leave work or family to do so, for example. We suggest that if intercessional F2F meetings are used more often that ICANN consider adopting the IETF approach that agreements
reached during F2F meetings are then subject to consideration by mailing list members.
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<p><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.1 on GNSO and the wider ICANN community developing ways to make the GNSO PDP process more time-effective</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">As with our comments on item 10.4 below, we are concerned that speed not be the main metric used to determine the performance of the GNSO. There is not one but three fundamental
ways to judge PDP performance: time, participativeness and agreement. Time measures only how long it took to get to a policy; the second two are effectively proxy measures for its quality. Stressing too much the most obvious performance variable could have
the unintentional consequence of sacrificing quality. Further, increasing the pressure of time can result in forced compromises that quickly fall apart or result in participants end-running to the Board, a phenomenon the report identifies. This undermines
the legitimacy of the whole process. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We suggest this recommendation be revised to stress more that ‘time-effective’ encompasses efficient use of participants’ time – including preparation for and chairing of calls
and follow-up activities, etc. – rather than focusing on a single, quantifiable metric that can draw attention away from other qualities.
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<p><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.2 on the GAC, with the GNSO, developing ways to input to PDP Working Groups</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We strongly support this recommendation and are eager to work with the GAC on ways to implement it.
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<p><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.3 on the Board and GNSO chartering a strategic initiative to broaden participation in GNSO PDPs</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We broadly support this recommendation and welcomed the detailed quantitative analysis provided in support of the need to broaden participation. We do also note staff’s observation
that in some cases input to public comments may appear to be from, for example, the US but has been submitted by a US-based individual on behalf of a peak organization that consulted more widely.
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<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Nonetheless, there is clearly a need to both broaden and deepen participation. Some of our councilors suggest that as well as outreach to increase participation from outside
of ICANN, we should also do ‘in reach’ to deepen participation by individuals already involved in ICANN but who have never participated in a Working Group. We ask that the ATRT2 may consider this suggestion.
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<p><b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">10.4 on the Board stating a process for setting gTLD policies when the GNSO ‘cannot come to closure on a specific issue within a specified time-frame’.</span></b><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">We share the concerns stated by others that the couching of this recommendation may unwittingly undermine the multi-stakeholder model in ICANN. Policy-making can take longer
than is predictable or desirable, but nonetheless be effective in its deliberativeness, output and degree of support. This recommendation seems to perpetuate a belief that the GNSO – the engine of gTLD policy development and the only part of ICANN driven by
carefully balanced stakeholder decision-making – is too slow and argumentative. That belief can drive some ICANN participants to go around the GNSO and straight to the Board, undermining the multi-stakeholder process and ICANN’s
<i>raison d’etre. </i>While Board deadlines can sometimes help overcome intractable differences, it’s not clear how to ensure constructive negotiation within the PDP without later recourse to the Board or GAC. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">This recommendation seems to contradict the research report finding that there is both a conflict but ultimately a ‘sweet spot’ to be found between policy-making being sufficiently
participatory and speedy. We suggest that this recommendation be revised to help the GNSO find that sweet spot – which will change from one issue to the next and is not a ‘one size fits all’ amount of pre-specified time. For example, the recommendation could
be re-drafted to suggest the Board interact formally or informally with the GNSO to find out more about PDPs that appear to be going too slowly; to find out if that is indeed the case, and to constructively offer advice or encouragement to assist.
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<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Recommendation 10.4 also says the Board should note under what conditions it believes it may alter PDP recommendations after formal Board acceptance. We support this part of
the recommendation. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Recommendation 10.4 also says there should be an additional step in the PDP Comment Process that allows those whose comments have been synthesized improperly to request changes.
We support this recommendation, while noting it will add some time to the process. Perhaps it could be implemented on an ‘if/then’ basis, i.e. inserting an opportunity for commenters to raise their initial concerns to trigger taking the additional step of
requesting changes to the summary. However, we also suggest replacing the term ‘improperly’ with ‘incorrectly’ or ‘wrongly’, as the word ‘improper’ has connotations of wrongdoing rather than inaccuracy, which don’t seem relevant here.
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<a href="http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/draft-recommendations-15oct13-en.pdf" target="_blank">
http://www.icann.org/en/about/aoc-review/atrt/draft-recommendations-15oct13-en.pdf</a></span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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