<div dir="ltr">Chuck, I incorporated them verbatim. Not sure what the issue is.<br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On 11 December 2013 19:00, Gomes, Chuck <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">One more thing on this. I was comfortable with the changes in wording that James & I agreed to previously. What happened to that?<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 1:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> James M. Bladel; Maria Farrell</span></p><div class="im"><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
</div><div><div class="h5"><b>Subject:</b> RE: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<u></u><u></u></div></div><p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">I don’t think that time-effectiveness can be dealt with in isolation of the other criteria. In fact, time-effectiveness itself is not the root problem, it
is the symptom. We could easily make PDPs shorter; would that solve the problem? We could reduce the time it takes to do a PDP? Would that be a measure of success? The original DNSO did that in policy work by having the GNSO Council act as a legislative
body. It’s easy to do things faster in a top-down management model. I am willing to consider other wording but I have a serious problem with the wording that is in the latest version Maria distributed. I think it undermines the other points we make.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Chuck<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> James M. Bladel
<a href="mailto:[mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com]" target="_blank">[mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com]</a> <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 1:12 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck; Maria Farrell<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">I’m not entirely on board with some of the sentiments expressed in your edits. Opponents of the PDP will often (and firstly) cite the -lack– of time efficiency
as the primary flaw in the process. If we are to address those internal and external critics, it seems that this should be highlighted above the other concerns…<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><Gomes>, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, December 11, 2013 at 12:02 <br>
<b>To: </b>Maria Farrell <<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com" target="_blank">maria.farrell@gmail.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>>, David Cake <<a href="mailto:dave@difference.com.au" target="_blank">dave@difference.com.au</a>>, Mike O'Connor <<a href="mailto:mike@haven2.com" target="_blank">mike@haven2.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a>"
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<b>Subject: </b>RE: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Regarding ‘</span><b><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">13.1 on GNSO and the wider ICANN community developing ways to make
the GNSO PDP process more time-effective</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">’:</span><span style><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">I don’t agree with this statement in the second paragraph: “</span><span style>So while we believe the PDP should be judged on several
criteria, time-effectiveness is currently the most pressing.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">” I don’t think it is the most pressing criterion but I do believe that is one of several that must be focused
on. I would be much more comfortable if we changed the sentence to something like this: “</span><span style>So while we believe the PDP should be judged on several criteria, time-effectiveness
</span><span style="color:#00b0f0">needs to be addressed</span><span style>.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">”</span><span style><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Along the same line, I would change the last paragraph as follows: “</span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">Additionally
we suggest that while </span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif";color:#00b0f0">one
</span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">concern is time-effectiveness and
<s>the fact that the</s> PDP</span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif";color:#00b0f0">s</span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">
<s>simply takes too</s></span><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif";color:#00b0f0">take a lot of time
</span><s><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">long</span></s><span style="font-size:13.0pt;font-family:"Times","serif"">, reference might be also made in your recommendations to other, more qualitative measures
of the effectiveness of policy-making; deliberativeness, participation and support.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">”</span><span style><u></u><u></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:2.25pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">In my opinion, it is critical to focus on all the criteria together rather than isolating one as the most important. As our other
comments on this suggest, that risks sacrificing qualitative criteria. Do we want to compromise the bottom-up multi-stakeholder model to make PDPs more time efficient? I don’t think so. I believe what we want to do is to find ways to improve time-effectiveness
while still making sure that PDPs are bottom-up and multi-stakeholder. For example, the qualitative criteria of participation and support are areas where improvements could be made to improve time-effectiveness. Finally, I think that categorizing time-effectiveness
as the most pressing criterion is counter to what we say later in our comments: “</span><span style>we are concerned that speed not be the main metric used to determine the performance of the GNSO</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">”.</span><span style><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Maria Farrell [<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com" target="_blank">mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 12:26 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">
council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments</span><span style><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style>Here's a revised draft response to the ATRT2 recommendations. I've incorporated all the comments and changed the focus re time-effectiveness to something I hope is closer to our area
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style>If there are more comments between now and the deadline of 23.50 UTC tonight, I'll work them in tomorrow.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style>It would be helpful if you can make comments on the new draft, V.3, but if you're already knee-deep in V.2, then don't worry; just send comments on that one instead.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style>On 11 December 2013 17:02, Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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Chuck<br>
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-----Original Message-----<br>
From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>]<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style>Sent: Wednesday, December 11, 2013 10:20 AM<br>
To: Gomes, Chuck; David Cake<br>
Cc: Mike O'Connor; Maria Farrell; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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I guess the answer to your a or b or c question is YES. We have discussed such options (very briefly), but that is indeed something that we are not being prescriptive about.<br>
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The real thrust of the recommendation is the word "funded". We (the GNSO and community) are making good progress toward coming up with methodologies which could improve the policy development process, but many of them will require funding (whether for services,
travel or additional ICANN staff). What we are looking for is a commitment to put money into the process so that some of these pipe-dreams can become a reality.<br>
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Alan<br>
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At 11/12/2013 09:02 AM, Gomes, Chuck wrote:<br>
>Thanks Alan. Regarding the recommendations about using facilitators,<br>
>did the ATRT2 discuss whether these facilitators would be ICANN staff,<br>
>community volunteers trained by ICANN or paid service providers? I<br>
>understand that this may be more of an implementation issues than one<br>
>the ATRT2 may address in the final report but am just curious.<br>
><br>
>Chuck<br>
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>-----Original Message-----<br>
>From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>]<br>
>Sent: Tuesday, December 10, 2013 10:44 PM<br>
>To: David Cake; Gomes, Chuck<br>
>Cc: Mike O'Connor; Maria Farrell; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
>Subject: Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<br>
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>I am making these comments purely on my own behalf, but from the<br>
>perspective of being an ATRT2 member and the prime author of the<br>
>recommendation being discussed.<br>
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>First to Mikey, the numbering of the draft report was a mess. This<br>
>recommendation was numbered 10 in the Executive Summary and 13 in the<br>
>body of the report. The final support will (hopefully, with my fingers<br>
>crossed) be far more cohesive.<br>
><br>
>The titles were not consistent. The title of the section in the body of<br>
>the report was not just a reference to the GNSO PDP but "Improve the<br>
>Effectiveness of Cross Community Deliberations". In the final<br>
>recommendation there will still be a focus on the GNSO policy processes<br>
>(not necessarily limited to the PDP as the Bylaws Annex A does allow<br>
>for alternatives - not currently defined), but on wider deliberations<br>
>as well.<br>
><br>
>On the issue of speed, the intent of this recommendation section was<br>
>effective use of participants time, with a possible (and hoped for)<br>
>by-product of a faster overall process, so your comments are very<br>
>welcome. The hope is that if we can use people's time more effectively,<br>
>and they don't feel that much of the time in WG meetings is wasted, we<br>
>just might be able to get better participation. Getting people up to<br>
>speed outside of the formal WG meetings may also be a way of getting<br>
>more people involved and not boring those who already understand the<br>
>basic issues.<br>
><br>
>The problem with the reference to "facilitators" was noted in Buenos<br>
>Aires and the recommendation is being reworked in light of this. The<br>
>current draft reads "Develop funded options for professional services<br>
>to assist GNSO PDP WGs, and also draft explicit guidelines for when<br>
>such options may be invoked. Such services could include training to<br>
>enhance work group leaders and participants ability to address<br>
>difficult problems and situations, professional facilitation,<br>
>mediation, or negotiation." Based on the comment being developed, it<br>
>will likely be further revised.<br>
><br>
>The issue of "inreach" was also noted in Buenos Aires and has been<br>
>incorporated.<br>
><br>
>The comments being provided are extremely helpful, and I urge you to<br>
>get them submitted prior to the deadline.<br>
><br>
>As a personal note (not discussed in the ATRT at all), I am also<br>
>looking ahead to the possible outcomes of the Policy and Implementation<br>
>WG. It is conceivable that it may be recommended that when a<br>
>substantive "policy-like" issue is discovered during what we are<br>
>currently calling "implementation", it could be referred back to the<br>
>GNSO. If that were to happen, there would have to be FAR faster ways of<br>
>coming to closure than we now have in order to no unreasonably delay<br>
>the "implementation". Perhaps the kinds of things that we are talking<br>
>about here would end up helping in that brave new world as well.<br>
><br>
>Alan<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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