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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Here are some suggested edits in redline format for the section about making PDPs more time effective.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Maria Farrell [mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com]
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, December 12, 2013 7:17 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Jonathan Robinson<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Mike O'Connor; Gomes, Chuck; John Berard; Berry Cobb; James M. Bladel; Alan Greenberg; David Cake; council@gnso.icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Here is the updated version for discussion today.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Maria<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 12 December 2013 12:08, Maria Farrell <<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com" target="_blank">maria.farrell@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Hi Jonathan,<br>
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I'll send an updated version shortly. I'm doing my best to try and accommodate people's wishes, but it's not clear to me how.
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I will include any actual changes to the text that have been suggested in the past 18 hours - but general discussion on related points I'm not able to accommodate as I have a couple of other deadlines to get out before this afternoon. If anyone who's discussed
issues on-list wants to try inserting actual text, that would be welcome.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 12 December 2013 10:46, Jonathan Robinson <<a href="mailto:jrobinson@afilias.info" target="_blank">jrobinson@afilias.info</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">All,</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"> </span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I understand Petter’s point on timeliness and opportunity to consult with groups. Nevertheless,
we have had reasonable opportunity to consider the report and our respective group’s position/s on these.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Therefore, it seems that there are two key points:</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">1.</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">
</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Have we got sufficient agreement on the content?</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">2.</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">
</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Can we commit to a submission by the deadline tomorrow?</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"> </span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Accordingly, Maria please can you try to supply us with what you believe to be the latest
draft, ideally that we have substantial agreement on.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">We can use this as a basis to answer one and two above in the meeting today.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Mike O'Connor [mailto:<a href="mailto:mike@haven2.com" target="_blank">mike@haven2.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> 11 December 2013 23:07<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Cc:</b> John Berard; Berry Cobb; James M. Bladel; Maria Farrell; Alan Greenberg; David Cake; <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank">council@gnso.icann.org</a>></span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">i would add a couple variables<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> R = rigor<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB"> L (since "C" is already taken) = level of consensus<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">give me permission to do a sketchy work-product with low levels of consensus and i can bring a working-group home in a jiffy. ;-)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB">On Dec 11, 2013, at 2:27 PM, "Gomes, Chuck" <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I like it. I think it helps make my points with regard to time-effectiveness. </span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;color:#1F497D">J</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> John Berard [mailto:<a href="mailto:john@" target="_blank">john@</a><a href="http://crediblecontext.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">crediblecontext.com</span></a>] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 2:43 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Berry Cobb<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Gomes, Chuck; James M. Bladel; Maria Farrell; Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">council@gnso.icann.org</span></a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Who is this and what have you done with Berry?<br>
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Sent from my iPhone<span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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On Dec 11, 2013, at 11:36 AM, "Berry Cobb" <<a href="mailto:mail@berrycobb.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">mail@berrycobb.com</span></a>> wrote:<span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">All,</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I’m probably a bit tardy in offering this to the discussion, but it might at least help inform future
deliberations on the topic of time duration on a PDP. I started drafting a simple formula a while ago and I suspect a few more variables could be added.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Duration of a PDP is a function of participation X frequency X complexity X knowledge</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 12:00<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck; James M. Bladel; Maria Farrell<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">council@gnso.icann.org</span></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 1:47 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> James M. Bladel; Maria Farrell<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">council@gnso.icann.org</span></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [council] Draft ATRT2 Comments</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I don’t think that time-effectiveness can be dealt with in isolation of the other criteria. In fact,
time-effectiveness itself is not the root problem, it is the symptom. We could easily make PDPs shorter; would that solve the problem? We could reduce the time it takes to do a PDP? Would that be a measure of success? The original DNSO did that in policy
work by having the GNSO Council act as a legislative body. It’s easy to do things faster in a top-down management model. I am willing to consider other wording but I have a serious problem with the wording that is in the latest version Maria distributed.
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 11, 2013 1:12 PM<br>
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<b>Cc:</b> Alan Greenberg; David Cake; Mike O'Connor; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">council@gnso.icann.org</span></a><br>
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<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, December 11, 2013 at 12:02 <br>
<b>To: </b>Maria Farrell <<a href="mailto:maria.farrell@gmail.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">maria.farrell@gmail.com</span></a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</span></a>>, David Cake <<a href="mailto:dave@difference.com.au" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">dave@difference.com.au</span></a>>,
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