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<div>Thanks Phil. </div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">I realize everyone is probably at or watching the Senate hearings this morning, but just a reminder that we are on the clock to send anything to the Drafting Team/Board. </div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">There's likely nothing objectionable here, and I still think there's some value in sending the text (as modified by Paul). </div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">If there are no further edits, I'll ask Staff to post by noon Pacific. </div>
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<div id="AppleMailSignature">Thanks-</div>
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On May 23, 2016, at 21:37, Phil Corwin <<a href="mailto:psc@vlaw-dc.com">psc@vlaw-dc.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">On further thought, I note that this letter is to the Bylaws drafting team, not the Board.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">That doesn’t alter my suggestions on consulting with individual SGs/Cs, and making sure there are no deviations identified – but it does assuage my concern that the comments will not be given serious consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Phil Corwin<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 23, 2016 10:19 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Paul McGrady; 'James M. Bladel'; 'Drazek, Keith'<br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'Marika Konings'; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">As I think I understand from reviewing the thread, the current text now reads as follows:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> Dear Bylaws Drafting Team:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">The GNSO Council thanks you for your efforts in attempting to distill the instructions found in the CCWG-Accountability Report into a revised version of ICANN’s Bylaws. We note that
the draft Bylaws have generated significant public comment from members of the GNSO community.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">We ask you to carefully review each of these comments and give them serious consideration. It is important that the revised Bylaws remain faithful to the CCWG-Accountability Report on
which we, as a Council, were called upon to vote in Marrakech. We are fully at your disposal should you wish to consult us on any issue raised in the comments generated by the GNSO community.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:.5in"><span style="color:#1F497D">James Bladel<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">If that’s the case, then I have no serious objection to sending it, although I do have some misgivings.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">It doesn’t convey much beyond asking the Board to take their job seriously (and should we have to ask that in the first place?), and that we’re available for consultation. But we (in terms of the Council as a
whole) are not really available to explain the views files by the various SGs and Cs, as each of them emphasized different points – so maybe the letter should say that we are sure each of the separate groups making up the GNSO are available to further explain
their POV.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">The real misgiving, now that we know when the Board has scheduled its vote (and the outcome is preordained, I think we’d all agree) is that, by saying nothing further, we concede by implication that a vote six
days after the closing of the comment period constitutes serious consideration by the Board.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">At the least I think we should ask that they take steps, through consultation with their own lawyers and those advising the CCWG and CWG, to assure that that none of the comments has identified a draft Bylaws
provision that materially deviates from the final reports and recommendations – and that if they have, that the deviation has been cured.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks for your consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best, Philip<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:navy">Twitter: @VlawDC</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Paul McGrady<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 23, 2016 5:14 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> 'James M. Bladel'; 'Drazek, Keith'<br>
<b>Cc:</b> 'Marika Konings'; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks James. I think we just delete:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">“These include:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">[Paul McGrady to pull these links out of the public comment after it closes]”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">If we aren’t prepared to draw attention to all of the comments by GNSO members, I don’t want to see a hierarchy in place by making some referred to directly and some “also of interest”. This is especially so
due to the lack of utility of the letter generally. When I asked that we send one, it was when I was still operating under the impression that there would be a good faith process by which the public comments were carefully reviewed and considered prior to
adoption of the bylaws. From what we have seen from Bruce’s email, that will not be the case.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Best to all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> James M. Bladel [<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 23, 2016 11:23 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Paul McGrady; Drazek, Keith<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Marika Konings; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Paul -<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">If I’m understanding correctly, we could modify this sentence:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">"<span style="color:black">We ask you to carefully review each of these comments and give them serious consideration.</span><span style="font-size:11.5pt">”</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">To something like:</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;color:black">"</span>We ask you to carefully review each of these comments, <span style="font-size:11.5pt">and</span> any other submissions from members of the broader GNSO Community, and give them serious
consideration."<span style="font-family:"Times New Roman","serif""><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Thanks-<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Paul McGrady <<a href="mailto:policy@paulmcgrady.com">policy@paulmcgrady.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 23, 2016 at 11:18 <br>
<b>To: </b>Keith Drazek <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>James Bladel <<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">jbladel@godaddy.com</a>>, Marika Konings <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>>, GNSO Council List <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Likewise, excluding members of the GNSO community could be viewed as elevating comments from constituent bodies of the GNSO above actual users of ICANN services within the GNSO. To solve the problem,
how about let's not provide links, just tell them they need to take comments made by GNSO members seriously? <br>
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Sent from my iPhone<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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On May 23, 2016, at 12:04 PM, Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com">kdrazek@Verisign.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Fully agree with James here.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Regards,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Keith</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black"><a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>
[<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>James M. Bladel<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 23, 2016 10:57 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Paul McGrady; 'Marika Konings'; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">
council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Hi Paul -</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Off the cuff, I have some concerns about Council going further than official positions by the SGs/Cs. Most individuals or organizations have some affiliation with the GNSO, and it would be difficult
to make a clear distinction. The risks of us referencing one comment, while leaving out one from an equivalent person or group (even if due to error) could be seen as Council endorsement. </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Also, consider the scenario where there are significant differences between the position of a commenter versus their respective SG/C. If the RrSG comments in favor of chocolate ice cream, but
comments from GoDaddy favor vanilla, then by including both the Council could be perceived as undermining the consensus-building processes within that SG/C. In this case, the IPC & NTIA comments are probably aligned, but absent an analysis from Staff, we
should be cautious about inserting ourselves in to any position differences.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">I understand your intention to present a list that is as comprehensive as possible, but I’m concerned that there’s no way to do so in a fair an equitable manner, and especially without creating
precedent for future comments. But I’d welcome thoughts from other Councilors on this point.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Thanks—</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">J.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Paul McGrady <<a href="mailto:policy@paulmcgrady.com">policy@paulmcgrady.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 23, 2016 at 8:15 <br>
<b>To: </b>'Marika Konings' <<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>>, James Bladel <<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">jbladel@godaddy.com</a>>, GNSO Council List <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>RE: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks Marika. I think we have to go more granular than just the C’, SG’s etc. For example, INTA put in public comments. They are a member of the IPC and a therefore a member of the GNSO community.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Paul</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black"><a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>
[<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 23, 2016 7:59 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> James M. Bladel; Paul McGrady; <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">
council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">I believe Bruce just answered question #1. With regards to bullet 3:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.5pt">IPC - <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00028.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00028.html</a></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">NCSG - <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00022.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00022.html</a></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">BC - <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00024.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00024.html</a></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">ISPCP - <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00012.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00012.html</a></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">RySG - <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00011.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-draft-new-bylaws-21apr16/msg00011.html</a></span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Best regards,</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Marika Konings</span></b><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Senior Policy Director & Team Leader for the GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black"><<a href="mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org">owner-council@gnso.icann.org</a>> on behalf of "James M. Bladel" <<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">jbladel@godaddy.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Sunday 22 May 2016 at 13:35<br>
<b>To: </b>Paul McGrady <<a href="mailto:policy@paulmcgrady.com">policy@paulmcgrady.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Thanks for kicking this off. Generally, I’m good with this letter. A few questions/comments:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:10.5pt">Given the compressed timeline, can we ask Staff to confirm whether or not the Drafting Team will have an opportunity to amend the proposed bylaws before submitting to the Board? I’m assuming they will, but…</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">Should we also cc: the Board and/or CCWG Co-Chairs? (hedge)</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">With the Comment Period now closed, could we task someone from Policy Staff to assist Paul in gathering links to GNSO comments?</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6">
<span style="font-size:10.5pt">The Board is meeting this week to consider the draft bylaws. It is therefore imperative that we move quickly to get this sent. Councilors, please send edits/comments/concerns by EOD (Pacific) Monday to ensure that this is posted
overnight Tuesday.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Thanks again—</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Saturday, May 21, 2016 at 6:01 <br>
<b>To: </b>GNSO Council List <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[council] Proposed letter to the Drafting Team<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">On our last call, I volunteered t draft a short letter from James to the Bylaws Drafting Team. Here is the proposed body of that letter to be kicked around the Council list:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Dear Bylaws Drafting Team:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">The GNSO Council thanks you for your efforts in attempting to distill the instructions found in the CCWG-Accountability Report into a revised version of ICANN’s Bylaws. We note that the draft Bylaws have generated
significant public comment from members of the GNSO community. These include:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">[Paul McGrady to pull these links out of the public comment after it closes]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">We ask you to carefully review each of these comments and give them serious consideration. It is important that the revised Bylaws remain faithful to the CCWG-Accountability Report on which we, as a Council, were
called upon to vote in Marrakech. We are fully at your disposal should you wish to consult us on any issue raised in the comments generated by the GNSO community.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">James Bladel<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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