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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Ayden, Donna, Rafik,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I think I understand why the wording on diversity was carefully chosen, and even the CCWG on accountability WS2 acknowledges commonalities of interests and backgrounds within some stakeholder groups
– I don’t think that’s likely to change in the final report, that makes sense. I would personally even
<i>hope</i> that the ccSNO and RySG will take into account elements of importance other that those strictly mentioned by the CCWG given the remit of the CSC (such as some background on IDNs).
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">The other thing is that we should be cautious with the terminology. According to current procedure I think appointment and approval are used for different things: the appointment is made by the RySG
(as customer of the naming service) and then approved by the GNSO council. <o:p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">I would therefore probably prefer to text to stay as it is. If a reference to the CCWG is deemed useful however, I can probably live with something like this
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"><span lang="EN-US">The ccNSO and GNSO Council will consider the overall composition of the proposed CSC in terms of geographic diversity and skill sets” to indicate</span></span><span class="colour"><s><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">s</span></s></span><span class="size"><span lang="EN-US">
explicitly the role of </span></span><span class="colour"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">the</span></span><span class="size"><span lang="EN-US"> GNSO and ccNSO councils.</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">W</span><span class="colour"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">e also encourage the
</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">appointing organizations to consider the
</span><span class="colour"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">principles and elements of diversity that were identified by the Cross-Community Working Group on Accountability Work Stream 2 Diversity Sub-Group</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red">
in their appointment process. </span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:red"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><span style="color:#1F497D">Philippe
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span class="size"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">From:</span></b></span><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">
council [<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Ayden Férdeline</span></span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><br>
<span class="size"><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, May 24, 2018 10:22 AM</span><br>
<span class="size"><b>To:</b> Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>></span><br>
<span class="size"><b>Cc:</b> Council GNSO <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>></span><br>
<span class="size"><b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] Draft GNSO Council comment on CSC charter review</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Thanks very much Philippe, Donna, and Rafik for drafting this. In the penultimate paragraph, I suggest appending the following sentence in red: <o:p></o:p></p>
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<span class="size">We would recommend for language to be amended for clarity from “they will take into account the overall composition of the proposed CSC in terms of geographic diversity and skill set” to “The ccNSO and GNSO Council will consider the overall
composition of the proposed CSC in terms of geographic diversity and skill sets” to indicate</span><span class="colour"><s><span style="color:red">s</span></s></span><span class="size"> explicitly the role of
</span><span class="colour"><span style="color:red">the</span></span><span class="size"> GNSO and ccNSO councils.
</span><span class="colour"><span style="color:red">We furthermore encourage the respective councils to appoint members in line with the principles and elements of diversity that were identified by the Cross-Community Working Group on Accountability Work Stream
2 Diversity Sub-Group.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Ayden Férdeline<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">On 24 May 2018 8:22 AM, Rafik Dammak <<a href="mailto:rafik.dammak@gmail.com">rafik.dammak@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">as a follow-up of the council call, I am sending the draft comment for CSC charter review made by the small drafting team for council consideration.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">The deadline for submission is the 1st June.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I would like to thank again Philippe and Donna for volunteering.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Best,<o:p></o:p></p>
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