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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thanks Marika.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thank you to the drafting team. Overall, this looks good. I propose I tweak:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Replace:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce GDPR compliance policy with the WHOIS.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce a WHOIS policy that is compliant with the GDPR.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I think it makes it more clear that ePDP work is not to develop a GDPR compliance policy, but rather to develop WHOIS policy that is compliant with GDPR.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018 5:28 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> McGrady, Paul D. <PMcGrady@winston.com>; Martin Pablo Silva Valent <mpsilvavalent@gmail.com>; council@gnso.icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thanks, Paul, not sure what happened there but hopefully the attached version will be easier to read. I am still having issues in getting the footnotes to outline properly,
but at least this should be readable. I did go ahead and updated the heading so it reads GNSO Council review. Other edits / comments will be addressed by the drafting team.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Marika<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>> on behalf of "McGrady, Paul D." <<a href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, July 17, 2018 at 23:46<br>
<b>To: </b>Martin Pablo Silva Valent <<a href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thanks Martin.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Staff, the formatting is off. Can you please send around a cleaned up version for review? Secondly, it is mislabeled as “GNSO Review of …”. It should be “GNSO
Council Review of…” because the Council is not, of course, the GNSO itself.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Thanks much!</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Paul</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Pablo Silva Valent<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, July 17, 2018 12:16 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hereby I send the draft version of the <b>GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique</b> for your consideration. Thanks to Staff, Johan and Michele for working on it.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Martín<o:p></o:p></p>
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