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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks Marika, Martin and all who drafted this.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Paul’s phrasing seems more logical to me too.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Like the IGO-INGO, I suspect this EPDP part will have to be slightly tweaked after Thursday’s vote - hopefully (for the moment the text seems to
be saying the EPDP team is currently working while its own charter is also being defined :s )
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Regards,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> council [mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>McGrady, Paul D.<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018 1:13 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Marika Konings; Martin Pablo Silva Valent; council@gnso.icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks Marika.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thank you to the drafting team. Overall, this looks good. I propose I tweak:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Replace:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce GDPR compliance policy with the WHOIS.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">With<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Yes, the EPDP is currently active working on reviewing the Temporary Specification to produce a WHOIS policy that is compliant with the GDPR.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I think it makes it more clear that ePDP work is not to develop a GDPR compliance policy, but rather to develop WHOIS policy that is compliant
with GDPR. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""> Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 18, 2018 5:28 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> McGrady, Paul D. <PMcGrady@winston.com>; Martin Pablo Silva Valent <mpsilvavalent@gmail.com>; council@gnso.icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Thanks, Paul, not sure what happened there but hopefully the attached version will be easier to read. I am still having issues in getting the footnotes to outline
properly, but at least this should be readable. I did go ahead and updated the heading so it reads GNSO Council review. Other edits / comments will be addressed by the drafting team.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Marika<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">From: </span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="color:black">council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>> on behalf of "McGrady, Paul D." <<a href="mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com">PMcGrady@winston.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, July 17, 2018 at 23:46<br>
<b>To: </b>Martin Pablo Silva Valent <<a href="mailto:mpsilvavalent@gmail.com">mpsilvavalent@gmail.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks Martin.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Staff, the formatting is off. Can you please send around a cleaned up version for review? Secondly, it is mislabeled as “GNSO Review of …”.
It should be “GNSO Council Review of…” because the Council is not, of course, the GNSO itself.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks much!</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Best,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Paul</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""> council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Martin Pablo Silva Valent<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, July 17, 2018 12:16 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [council] GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Hello all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Hereby I send the draft version of the <b>GNSO Review of the Panama GAC Communique</b> for your consideration. Thanks to Staff, Johan and Michele for working on it.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Martín<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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