<div class="__aliyun_email_body_block"><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Dear <span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> and colleagues,</span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><br ></div><div  style="clear:both;">Thanks to <span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> for leading this effort. </div><div  style="clear:both;"><br ></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">The revised sentence makes sense but it is my understanding that <span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">after the</span><span  style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:#ffffff;float:none;display:inline;"> stewardship transition,</span><span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"> </span></span>ICANN continues to be the IANA functions operators while PTI is contracted to <span  style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;">serve as the operator for the IANA naming function. </span>Therefore, it seems to me the reference to IANA should be to PTI. I also propose two other minor edits: Policy be changed to policy; <span class="spellcheck_typo">TLDs</span> be changed to gTLDs:</div><div  style="clear:both;"><div  class="page" title="Page 1" style="caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><div class="layoutArea"><div class="column"><p ><span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">"The GNSO Council notes that one of our current policy development activities does potentially intersect with the operations of the IANA Functions by PTI. The New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Policy Development Process Working Group is currently developing </span><span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;float:none;text-decoration:line-through;display:inline;">P</span><span  style="caret-color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;color:#ff0000;display:inline;">p</span><span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"><span class="spellcheck_typo">olicy</span> that may ultimately instruct </span><span  style="text-decoration:line-through;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;float:none;display:inline;">IANA</span><span  style="color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-family:tahoma;"><span  style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"> <span  style="caret-color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;color:#ff0000;display:inline;">PTI</span> to place new <span  style="caret-color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#f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 instructs IANA to put new <span class="spellcheck_typo">TLDs</span> in the root, so I’m not sure that the statement is accurate.  Is there a way to clarify what was meant by this sentence?  Thanks!<br ><br ><br ><br >Best,<br >Paul<br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br >From: council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org>> On Behalf Of <span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline<br >Sent: Friday, November 9, 2018 9:08 AM<br >To: <span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline <icann@ferdeline.com<mailto:icann@ferdeline.com>><br >Cc: GNSO Council List <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>><br >Subject: Re: [council] Proposed GNSO Council comment on the draft FY20 IANA/PTI Budget<br ><br ><br ><br >Dear all,<br ><br ><br ><br >Just a friendly reminder; the attached comment will be submitted on behalf of the GNSO Council this coming Monday, unless an objection is raised. (The only further edit that would be made would be to remove the 'draft' watermark from the document.) Thank you.<br ><br ><br ><br >Kind regards,<br ><br ><br ><br ><span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline<br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br >‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br ><br >On Wednesday, 7 November 2018 11:00, <span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline <icann@ferdeline.com<mailto:icann@ferdeline.com>> wrote:<br ><br ><br ><br >Dear all,<br ><br ><br ><br >On behalf of the <span class="spellcheck_typo">Council's</span> Standing Committee on Budget and Operations, please find attached a comment that we have prepared on the draft FY20 IANA/PTI budget.<br ><br ><br ><br >We are seeking to submit this comment on behalf of the Council on 12 November 2018, absent any objections from a member of the Council.<br ><br ><br ><br >With apologies for not getting this into your inbox sooner, can you please review the attached document as a matter of urgency. Thank you very much.<br ><br ><br ><br >Kind regards,<br ><br ><br ><br ><span class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline<br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br ><br >________________________________<br >The contents of this message may be privileged and confidential. If this message has been received in error, please delete it without reading it. Your receipt of this message is not intended to waive any applicable privilege. Please do not disseminate this message without the permission of the author. Any tax advice contained in this email was not intended to be used, and cannot be used, by you (or any other taxpayer) to avoid penalties under applicable tax laws and regulations.<br ><br ><br ><FY20 IANA-PTI Proposed OpPlan Budget - GNSO Draft Comments_v0.4 - AF edits.<span class="spellcheck_typo">docx</span>> _______________________________________________<br >council mailing list<br >council@gnso.icann.org<br >https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/council<br >_______________________________________________<br >council mailing list<br >council@gnso.icann.org<br >https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/council<br ></blockquote><div ><br ></div></div>