<div class="__aliyun_email_body_block"><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;"><strong ><span style="font-size:14.0px;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"><font face="tahoma">Dear <span class="spellcheck_typo">Philippe</span></font><font face="tahoma"> and Councilors,</font></span></strong></span></div><div style="clear:both;"><strong ><span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"><br ></span></strong></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;"><strong ><span style="font-size:14.0px;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">Re: </span></strong><b style="font-family:Arial;font-size:15.0px;"><u ><span style="font-size:14.0px;line-height:15.3px;">Item 6: COUNCIL DISCUSSION – Managing the EPDP Implementation Gap and Back-up Plans </span></u></b></span><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;"> </span></p><strong ><span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"></span></strong></div><div style="clear:both;"><strong ><span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;font-size:13.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;"><span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">My understanding of a possible implementation gap is the time between the expiration of the </span><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">Temporary Specification and when the recommendations in the Final Report are implemented (i.e., when the new policy recommendations become effective). <span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">I would also note implementation of some of the recommendations is likely to involve other parties, not only the contracted parties. </span></span></span></strong></div><div style="clear:both;"><strong ></strong><br ></div><div style="clear:both;">It seems reasonable to assume that the ICANN Board will reaffirm the Temporary Specification once more (https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2019-01-29-en). If so, the <span style="caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;background-color:#ffffff;text-decoration:none;float:none;display:inline;">Temporary Specification will expire on 25 May 2019. </span> </div><div style="clear:both;"><br ></div><div style="clear:both;">Based on the above, I would suggest a couple more edits:</div><div style="clear:both;">Redline:</div><div style="clear:both;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;">"Given the considerable advance undertaken by the EPDP Team in Toronto, concerns have now shifted to a possible gap between </span><span style="text-decoration:line-through;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;">the finalization of the Fin</span><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;text-decoration:line-through;">al Report and its recommendations, approval by the Council and Board before, </span><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;">the expiration of the Temporary Specification and the implementation of the recommendations </span><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;text-decoration:line-through;">by the contracted parties</span><span style="font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;">. What is the solution if contracted parties need more time to be able to implement the recommendations in the Final Report? This would not be of the GNSO <span class="spellcheck_typo">Council’s</span> remit but lies within the EPDP team and potentially contractual negotiations between the contracted parties and ICANN."</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><br ></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;">Clean:</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;line-height:16.9px;"><span style="margin:.0px;padding:.0px;border:.0px;outline:.0px;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-weight:normal;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;font-size:13.0px;line-height:15.3px;background-color:white;">"Given the considerable advance undertaken by the EPDP Team in Toronto, concerns have now shifted to a possible gap between the expiration of the Temporary Specification and the implementation of the recommendation. What is the solution if contracted parties need more time to be able to implement the recommendations in the Final Report? This would not be of the GNSO <span class="spellcheck_typo">Council’s</span> remit but lies within the EPDP team and potentially contractual negotiations between the contracted parties and ICANN."</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;line-height:16.9px;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;line-height:16.9px;"></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;"><br ></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;">I hope these edits make sense. Let me know if anyone has any concerns or other suggested edits.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><br ></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;">Kind regards,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><br ></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><span style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:tahoma;">Pam</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;line-height:16.9px;caret-color:#000000;font-variant-caps:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;"><br ></p></div><blockquote style="margin-right:0;margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0;"><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">------------------------------------------------------------------</span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Sender:<span class="spellcheck_typo">philippe</span>.fouquart <philippe.fouquart@orange.com></span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Sent At:2019 Jan. 30 (Wed.) 22:09</span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Recipient:Nathalie Peregrine <nathalie.peregrine@icann.org>; council@gnso.icann.org <council@gnso.icann.org></span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Cc:gnso-secs@icann.org <gnso-secs@icann.org></span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Subject:Re: [council] Draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting 24 January 2019</span></div><div style="clear:both;"><span style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;"><br ></span></div><style >!-- @font-face{font-family:Calibri;panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}{font-family:Tahoma;panose-1:2 11 6 4 3 5 4 4 2 4;}p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal{margin:.0cm;margin-bottom:.0pt;font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;}a:link, span.MsoHyperlink{mso-style-priority:99;color:#0563c1;text-decoration:underline;}a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed{mso-style-priority:99;color:#954f72;text-decoration:underline;}p.msonormal0, li.msonormal0, div.msonormal0{mso-style-name:msonormal;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-right:.0cm;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:.0cm;font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;}span.EmailStyle18{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle19{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle20{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle21{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle22{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle23{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle24{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle25{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle26{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle27{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle28{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle29{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle30{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle31{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle32{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle33{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle34{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle35{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle36{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle37{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle38{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle39{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle40{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle41{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle42{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle43{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle44{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle45{mso-style-type:personal;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:windowtext;}span.EmailStyle46{mso-style-type:personal-reply;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;font-weight:normal;font-style:normal;}.MsoChpDefault{mso-style-type:export-only;font-size:10.0pt;}@page WordSection1{size:612.0pt 792.0pt;margin:72.0pt 72.0pt 72.0pt 72.0pt;}div.WordSection1{page:WordSection1;}--></style><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;">Thanks for this Nathalie.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;">Maybe this is just my misreading this but regarding the discussion on the EPDP I believe the concern was the potential gap between finalization+approval(s)
of the final report on one hand and the implementation of the recommendations by contracted parties on the other (which may indeed require some time). To me the first sentence of current text reads as if it were (still) between approvals and expiration of
the temp spec.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;background-color:white;">[…] concerns have now shifted to a possible implementation gap between the finalization of the Final Report and its recommendations, approval by the Council,
approval by the Board and the expiration of the Temporary Specification.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;">A couple of additional edits on the CSC effectiveness, as attached.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;">Regards,
</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"><span class="spellcheck_typo">Philippe</span>
</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;"> </span></p><div ><div style="border-style:solid none none;border-top-width:1.0px;border-top-color:#b5c4df;padding:.0px .0cm .0cm;"><p class="MsoNormal"><b ><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:13.0px;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif;"> council [mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org]
<b >On Behalf Of </b>Nathalie Peregrine<br ><b >Sent:</b> Monday, January 28, 2019 9:47 PM<br ><b >To:</b> council@gnso.icann.org<br ><b >Cc:</b> gnso-secs@icann.org<br ><b >Subject:</b> [council] Draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting 24 January 2019</span></p></div></div><p class="MsoNormal"> </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Dear Councilors,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Attached, please find the draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting Thursday 24 January 2019 for your review.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">If there are no comments, these minutes will be published on the website as approved, according to the </span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_council_op-2Dprocedures-2D30jan18-2Den.pdf&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=PDd_FX3f4MVgkEIi9GHvVoUhbecsvLhgsyXrxgtbL10DTBs0i1jYiBM_uTSDzgqG&m=VJZ4HFSDAqi8xbWCH1QdnlYHCscwUVxIRs2sVJWonVI&s=LtHAxrGECvjzBZS-IMiftG_6sd2rnsdL4iqkUOHsJvI&e=" target="_blank"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">GNSO
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<b >7 February 2019.</b></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Thank you very much.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Kind regards,</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Nathalie</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Nathalie Peregrine</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;">Manager, Operations Support (GNSO)</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;">Email: </span><span style="font-size:13.0px;"><a href="nathalie.peregrine@icann.org%20" target="_blank">nathalie.peregrine@icann.org </a></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.0px;"><span class="spellcheck_typo">Skype</span>: nathalie.peregrine.<span class="spellcheck_typo">icann</span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:15.0px;">Find out more about the GNSO by taking our i</span><a href="applewebdata://EB3A6F47-9760-400D-A39B-A7EFFC56B467/learn.icann.org/courses/gnso" target="_blank"><span style="font-size:15.0px;"><span class="spellcheck_typo">nteractive</span>
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