<div>You have highlighted roughly two sentences that I added into the document out of 150 or so edits which I proposed. I have not re-reviewed the document to see which changes were ultimately accepted and which were not, but I had thought the intention was for this to be an accurate summary of the discussions that had been had during the Session and intended to reflect all views which had been expressed. I do remember us having a sustained conversation on this topic and the potential harm that could result to the GNSO’s reputation by GNSO processes being delayed. If that is not the case and only certain views are to be captured in this document, perhaps it would be better to have transcripts in the future. </div><div><br></div><div>Thank you. </div><div><br></div><div id="protonmail_mobile_signature_block">Ayden Férdeline </div> <div><br></div><div><br></div>On Thu, Feb 28, 2019 at 23:58, Drazek, Keith <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com" class="">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<blockquote class="protonmail_quote" type="cite">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks for your work on this. I have asked Steve to incorporate some of your stylistic edits and some additional language, but I don’t think we can include the commentary on the participation of other SO/AC members in the EPDP and suggestions
that other groups are sending discredited and disruptive members to engage with the GNSO. That’s not something we should include in our formal report on the SPS.
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<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Wednesday, February 27, 2019 10:29 PM, Darcy Southwell <<a href="mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com">darcy.southwell@endurance.com</a>> wrote:</p>
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<p>Attached, please find the proposed final 2019 Strategic Planning Session report, with red-lined edits. Thank you all for your review.
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<p>Darcy, please take a look at the suggested edits and let me know if you find them acceptable. There was one comment on Day 2, section B where I ended up not making a change, so please let me know if you have any issues with that approach.</p>
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<p>Best,</p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>> on behalf of Steve Chan <<a href="mailto:steve.chan@icann.org">steve.chan@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, February 26, 2019 at 1:43 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Darcy Southwell <<a href="mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com">darcy.southwell@endurance.com</a>>, "Drazek, Keith" <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report</span></p>
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<p>Thanks very much for the suggested changes and input Darcy. I will revert a red-lined document tomorrow, to allow for any additional input from other Councilors.</p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">council <<a href="mailto:council-bounces@gnso.icann.org">council-bounces@gnso.icann.org</a>> on behalf of Darcy Southwell <<a href="mailto:darcy.southwell@endurance.com">darcy.southwell@endurance.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, February 26, 2019 at 7:45 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"Drazek, Keith" <<a href="mailto:kdrazek@verisign.com">kdrazek@verisign.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org">gnso-secs@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:council@gnso.icann.org">council@gnso.icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [council] FW: DRAFT - 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session Report</span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thanks for the reminder, Keither. And thanks to staff for putting this report together. We discussed so many issues and concepts in detail during that three days ... the level of detail caputured
in tihs report is impressive. I've added some comments to the attached to highlight points of clarification or expanded detail from my perspective.</span></p>
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<p>A reminder to please review the 2019 SPS Report and provide any suggested edits or comments to Steve by tomorrow.</p>
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<p>Dear Councilors,</p>
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<p>Attached, please find the draft report from the 2019 GNSO Council Strategic Planning Session, which seeks to capture objectives, discussions, agreements, and action items for each of the three days. The report has been added as a brief AOB item for the upcoming
Council meeting, not necessarily to discuss in detail, but to provide a high-level overview and to communicate a deadline for your review and suggested edits.
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<p>Please let me know if you have any questions.</p>
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<p>Best,</p>
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