<div class="__aliyun_email_body_block"><div  style="clear:both;">Hi all,</div><div  style="clear:both;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma;"><br ></span></div><div  style="clear:both;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma;">I have added more comments and minor edits to the version <span  class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> circulated earlier. </span></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma;color:black;border:1.0px none windowtext;padding:.0px;"><br ></span></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma;color:black;border:1.0px none windowtext;padding:.0px;">I admit this is the first time I read a GNSO Council Recommendations Report to the Board and it strikes me that the report template might need to be updated. </span></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma;color:black;border:1.0px none windowtext;padding:.0px;"><br >Specifically, what seem missing in this draft report are things like policy goals, policy impact analysis and metrics to measure effectiveness of the new policy. These were recommendations from the Data & Metrics Working Group and the most recent GNSO Review, which were approved by the Council and supposedly fully implemented but neither the EPDP Charter, the EPDP Final Report nor this draft report cover these topics. I would have thought these topic are essential for the Council and the Board when approving any PDP/EPDP final recommendations.</span></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;font-family:Tahoma;color:black;border:1.0px none windowtext;padding:.0px;"><br ></span></div><div  style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Cambria;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;background-color:white;line-height:normal;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma;font-size:14.0px;">I note there are relevant sections (such as 3 and 10) in the draft report but, as currently drafted, Section 3 reads like a restatement of the concerns or positions of certain <span  class="spellcheck_typo">SGs</span> and </span><span  style="font-family:Tahoma;font-size:14.0px;">Cs while Section 10 does not contain substantive analysis:</span></div><div  style="clear:both;line-height:normal;"> </div><div  style="clear:both;"><b  style="font-family:Calibri;"><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">"3 (An analysis of how the issue(s) would affect each Constituency or Stakeholder Group, including any financial impact on the Constituency or Stakeholder Group) seems to be just a rehash of concerns or positions each SG's/<span  class="spellcheck_typo">C's</span> </span></b><br ></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">....</span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><p  class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Calibri;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;"><b ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">10. Impact/implementation considerations from ICANN staff </span></b></p><p  class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Calibri;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;"><b ></b></p><p  class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Calibri;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;"><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">The internal ICANN <span  class="spellcheck_typo">org</span> implementation team has formed and has begun to review the recommendations to analyze the implementation requirements. ICANN <span  class="spellcheck_typo">org</span> considers the scope of effort required for this implementation to be significant and extensive. "</span></p><p  class="MsoNormal" style="margin:.0px .0cm .0pt;font-size:medium;font-family:Calibri;caret-color:#000000;color:#000000;font-style:normal;font-variant-caps:normal;font-weight:normal;text-align:start;text-indent:.0px;text-transform:none;text-decoration:none;"><span  style="font-family:Times New Roman;"> </span></p></div><div  style="clear:both;">I welcome others' thoughts.</div><div  style="clear:both;"><br ></div><div  style="clear:both;">Kind regards,</div><div  style="clear:both;"><br ></div><div  style="clear:both;">Pam <br ></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;"><br ></span></div><blockquote  style="margin-right:0;margin-top:0;margin-bottom:0;"><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">------------------------------------------------------------------</span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Sender:<span  class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> Férdeline <icann@ferdeline.com></span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Sent At:2019 Mar. 30 (Sat.) 21:43</span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Recipient:Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org></span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Cc:gnso-secs@icann.org <gnso-secs@icann.org>; council@gnso.icann.org <council@gnso.icann.org></span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;">Subject:Re: [council] Recommendations Report on EPDP</span></div><div  style="clear:both;"><span  style="font-family:Tahoma,Arial,STHeiti,SimSun;font-size:14.0px;color:#000000;"><br ></span></div><div >Hi Caitlin, all-<br ></div><div ><br ></div><div >Please find attached some suggested edits to this document. <br ></div><div ><br ></div><div >Thanks,<br ></div><div  class="protonmail_signature_block"><div  class="protonmail_signature_block-user"><div ><span  class="spellcheck_typo">Ayden</span> <br ></div></div><div  class="protonmail_signature_block-proton protonmail_signature_block-empty"><br ></div></div><div ><br ></div><div >‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ Original Message ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐<br ></div><div > On Saturday, March 30, 2019 12:07 AM, Caitlin Tubergen <caitlin.tubergen@icann.org> wrote:<br ></div><div > <br ></div><div ><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Dear Councilors:</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Attached, please find the draft GNSO Council Report to the ICANN Board on the EPDP recommendations for your consideration.</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Following the customary practice, this report will be added to the <span  class="spellcheck_typo">Council’s</span> 18 April consent agenda, unless there are any comments or concerns with this approach.</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">If you have any proposed edits or comments on the report, please kindly submit them by the document deadline of <b >Monday,</b> <b >8 April 2018</b>.</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Thank you.</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Kind regards,</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;">Caitlin</span><br ></p><p ><span  style="font-size:15.0px;"> </span><br ></p><p ><b ><span  style="color:black;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;">--</span></span></b><br ></p><p ><b ><span  style="color:black;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;">Caitlin Tubergen</span></span></b><br ></p><p ><span  style="color:black;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;">Policy Senior Manager - GNSO</span></span><br ></p><p ><span  style="color:black;"><span  style="font-size:14.0px;">ICANN</span></span><br ></p><p ><span  style="color:black;"><span  style="font-family:Times New Roman,serif;"><span  style="font-size:1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