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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear all: I did not
write the summary yet as I was waiting for the body of the text
to stabilize. I know we don't have to be rigid about it, but, as
I have always understood it, a summary is usually a brief
synopsis that stands alone for people who have not read the full
text or sometimes it is posted elsewhere on its own with a link
to the full text. A summary is not the same as an introduction
-- which presents a large idea which is then deconstructed.<br>
</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">I was not expecting
others to write the summary or for other ideas to creep into the
summary. If I am misunderstanding this, please let me know.<br>
</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Marita<br>
</font></p>
<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/31/2019 4:04 PM,
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a> wrote:<br>
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cite="mid:61A09655-AE82-4E5F-84C6-ADA34E92D0C6@christopherwilkinson.eu">
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Dear Maureen: I don’t quite understand the urgency of these
deadlines, perhaps I have missed something.
<div class=""><br class="">
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<div class="">In any event, a final ‘official’ Executive Summary
has not yet been proposed. <I would like to see that, even if
my contribution is attenuated (or ignored.)</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">As I said on the Wiki, I think that Siva’s
encouragement for MS governance, actually goes too far in the
face of the shortcomings of ICANN’s MS structures, as described
in the report. I also believe that it goes beyond anything that
<a href="http://ICANN.org" class="" moz-do-not-send="true">ICANN.org</a>
has been saying in the Geneva UN IG discussions. TBC.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Regards</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">CW</div>
<div class="">ALS - ISOC Wallonia BE.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">PS: Evin for the Staff, actually acknowledged
receipt of my draft, quite positively. </div>
<div class="">But community consensus should take precedence … </div>
<div class="">Thank you Evin!!</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
<div><br class="">
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<div class="">On 31 May 2019, at 21:20, Maureen Hilyard <<a
href="mailto:maureen.hilyard@gmail.com" class=""
moz-do-not-send="true">maureen.hilyard@gmail.com</a>>
wrote:</div>
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<div class="">
<div dir="ltr" class="">Christopher
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</div>
<div class="">You have time to put in a personal
submission. I can appreciate what Marita is saying
that the current statement has been formed by
discussion within the CPWG over a number of calls and
cannot easily be changed without consultation and
possible changes that there is no time to make. </div>
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</div>
<div class="">Perhaps in the executive summary it may
state that a late alternative view was proposed and an
individual submission to the public comment has been
suggested.</div>
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</div>
<div class="">Maureen</div>
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<div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, May 31, 2019
at 7:59 AM Marita Moll <<a
href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" class=""
moz-do-not-send="true">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>>
wrote:<br class="">
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<p class=""><font class="" face="Times New Roman,
Times, serif">Dear Christopher,</font></p>
<p class=""><font class="" face="Times New Roman,
Times, serif">Evin needs to have this by this
weekend in order to process the thing on time.
So, it will be over by Wednesday's call. <br
class="">
</font></p>
<p class=""><font class="" face="Times New Roman,
Times, serif">And "no other comments" cannot be
assumed as support for your intervention. As the
chief penholder, I feel the need to reflect the
content properly in the summary, not start
another discussion. Unless other people chime
in, that's my position.</font></p>
<p class=""><font class="" face="Times New Roman,
Times, serif">Marita<br class="">
</font></p>
<div
class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On
5/31/2019 1:00 PM, <a
class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu"
target="_blank" moz-do-not-send="true">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
wrote:<br class="">
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<blockquote type="cite" class=""> Dear Marita:
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Thankyou. However, since there is
not a final text of the Executive Summary, I
would wish to maintain my proposed draft.</div>
<div class="">There is another CPWG on Wednesday
evening (19.00 UTC) when we could review this
and any other eventual proposals.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">I consider that my draft does in
fact support the body of the opinion. I note
that there have been no other comments
meanwhile.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">I can’t apologise for coming in
‘late’ to this; recent CPWG schedules have been
very challenging here for several reasons.
Furthermore, a lot of time has been spent on
EPDP, whereas in the longer term
multi-stakeholder strategy is far more
important.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">I maintain my comment.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Best regards</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Christopher.<br class="">
<div class=""><br class="">
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<div class="">On 31 May 2019, at 16:19,
Marita Moll <<a
href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net"
target="_blank" class=""
moz-do-not-send="true">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>>
wrote:</div>
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<p class=""><font class="" face="Times
New Roman, Times, serif">Hi
Christopher. I totally think your
points are great -- but it has not
been part of the discussion we have
had so far in three conference calls
so I don't feel, at this point, that
I have permission to pursue this
line of thinking. The summary needs
to be a summary of what is already
in the body of the document, not an
intro to another document. <br
class="">
</font></p>
<p class=""><font class="" face="Times
New Roman, Times, serif">We might be
able to use it in the next iteration
of this exercise which will not end
here. <br class="">
</font></p>
<p class=""><font class="" face="Times
New Roman, Times, serif">Marita</font><br
class="">
</p>
<div
class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On
5/29/2019 2:10 PM, <a
class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank"
moz-do-not-send="true">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
wrote:<br class="">
</div>
<blockquote type="cite" class=""> PS:
In the penultimate line, replace’
organisation’ by’ community'.
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</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">CW<br class="">
<div class=""><br class="">
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<div class="">On 29 May 2019, at
20:00, <a
href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu"
target="_blank" class=""
moz-do-not-send="true">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
wrote:</div>
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class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363Apple-interchange-newline">
<div class="">
<div style="overflow-wrap:
break-word;" class="">Good
evening, Further to today's
CPWG Call, I would like to
submit the following text as
a contribution fo the
Executive Summary:
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class=""> … still to be
completed …
<p
style="margin-bottom:0in"
class="" lang="en-US">"Otherwise,
the international
perception of our unique
experiment in
multi-stakeholder
governance will be
undermined. Indeed the
imbalances within the
ICANN community –
described and discussed
in this paper – go well
beyond dysfunctional
consensus building, and
nowadays have
significant economic,
political and social
consequences which
disproportionately
privilege incumbent
stakeholders at the
expense of others, both
present and in the
future, within and
beyond the ICANN
structure.</p>
<p
style="margin-bottom:0in"
class="" lang="en-US">The
current review of
Evolving ICANN's
Multi-stakeholder Model
needs to look well
beyond the internal
relationships between
the Supporting
Organisations and
Advisory Committees, and
address the question as
to how the present
arrangements are viewed
more widely, elsewhere
in the world.<br
class="">
<br class="">
In most other regulated
sectors of activity,
companies and public
authorities expect the
allocation and
supervision of public
resources to benefit
from decisions taken by
independent agencies
which are normally
careful to avoid
conflicts of interest,
insider trading or
collusion among
incumbents. Insofar as
ICANN is nowadays
managing the allocation,
and supervising the use
of, quite vast economic
resources, our present
structure and
performance likely
appears to many as quite
unusual.<br class="">
<br class="">
Thus, arguably, the
declared advantages of
the multi-stakeholder
model no longer
outweigh, in our case,
the disadvantages
arising from the
particular structure
that has evolved in
ICANN during the past
two decades, and which
are discussed in some
detail in this report.
Accordingly the
necessary rebalancing of
participation and powers
within the ICANN
organisation is in fact
an essential factor in
global internet
Governance (IG) at
large. It would also
enhance the efficiency
and transparency of our
decisions and policies."</p>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Regards</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">Christopher
Wilkinson</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
</div>
<div class="">PS: I shall
endeavour to post this
text to the Wiki as a
Comment later today.</div>
<div class=""><br class="">
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class="">
<div class="">On 29
May 2019, at 02:40,
Marita Moll <<a
href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net"
target="_blank"
class=""
moz-do-not-send="true">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>>
wrote:</div>
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class="">
<p class=""><font
class=""
face="Times
New Roman,
Times, serif">Hello
cpwg members.
Please take a
look at the
google doc re:
comment on the
MS model <b
class="">BEFORE</b>
the call.
There is a
document, and
there are
comments on
the document
you might want
to address. If
no one has
issues with
the document
or with my
responses to
comments made
to the
document, then
we won't have
much to
discuss. I
don't have any
slides to
present. The
document
itself will be
our reference
point.<br
class="">
</font></p>
<p class=""><a
href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit"
target="_blank" class="" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit</a></p>
<p class="">Thanks</p>
<p class="">Marita<br
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