<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Dear Marita:<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thankyou.  However, since there is not a final text of the Executive Summary, I would wish to maintain my proposed draft.</div><div class="">There is another CPWG on Wednesday evening (19.00 UTC) when we could review this and any other eventual proposals.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I consider that my draft does in fact support the body of the opinion. I note that there have been no other comments meanwhile.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I can’t apologise for coming in ‘late’ to this; recent CPWG schedules have been very challenging here for several reasons.  Furthermore, a lot of time has been spent on EPDP, whereas in the longer term multi-stakeholder strategy is far more important.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I maintain my comment.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Best regards</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Christopher.<br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 31 May 2019, at 16:19, Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" class="">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class="">
  
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        totally think your points are great  -- but it has not been part
        of the discussion we have had so far in three conference calls
        so I don't feel, at this point, that I have permission to pursue
        this line of thinking. The summary needs to be a summary of what
        is already in the body of the document, not an intro to another
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        use it in the next iteration of this exercise which will not end
        here. <br class="">
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 5/29/2019 2:10 PM,
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      PS:  In the penultimate line, replace’ organisation’ by’
      community'.
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      <div class="">CW<br class="">
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            <div class="">On 29 May 2019, at 20:00, <a href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" class="" moz-do-not-send="true">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
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                evening, Further to today's CPWG Call, I would like to
                submit the following text as a contribution fo the
                Executive Summary:
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                <div class=""> … still to be completed …
                  <p style="margin-bottom: 0in" class="" lang="en-US">"Otherwise,
                    the
                    international perception of our unique experiment in
                    multi-stakeholder governance will be undermined.
                    Indeed the
                    imbalances within the ICANN community – described
                    and discussed in
                    this paper – go well beyond dysfunctional consensus
                    building, and
                    nowadays have significant economic, political and
                    social consequences
                    which disproportionately privilege incumbent
                    stakeholders at the
                    expense of others, both present and in the future,
                    within and beyond
                    the ICANN structure.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0in" class="" lang="en-US">The
                    current review of
                    Evolving ICANN's Multi-stakeholder Model needs to
                    look well beyond
                    the internal relationships between the Supporting
                    Organisations and
                    Advisory Committees, and address the question as to
                    how the present
                    arrangements are viewed more widely, elsewhere in
                    the world.<br class="">
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                    In
                    most other regulated sectors of activity, companies
                    and public
                    authorities expect the allocation and supervision of
                    public resources
                    to benefit from decisions taken by independent
                    agencies which are
                    normally careful to avoid conflicts of interest,
                    insider trading or
                    collusion among incumbents. Insofar as ICANN is
                    nowadays managing the
                    allocation, and supervising the use of, quite vast
                    economic
                    resources, our present structure and performance
                    likely appears to
                    many as quite unusual.<br class="">
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                    Thus, arguably, the declared advantages
                    of the multi-stakeholder model no longer outweigh,
                    in our case, the
                    disadvantages arising from the particular structure
                    that has evolved
                    in ICANN during the past two decades, and which are
                    discussed in some
                    detail in this report. Accordingly the necessary
                    rebalancing of participation and powers within the
                    ICANN organisation
                    is in fact an essential factor in global internet
                    Governance (IG) at
                    large. It would also enhance the efficiency and
                    transparency of our decisions and policies."</p>
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                  <div class="">Regards</div>
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                  <div class="">Christopher Wilkinson</div>
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                  <div class="">PS: I shall endeavour to post this text
                    to the Wiki as a Comment later today.</div>
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                      <div class="">On 29 May 2019, at 02:40, Marita
                        Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" class="" moz-do-not-send="true">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>>
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                              Roman, Times, serif">Hello cpwg members.
                              Please take a look at the google doc re:
                              comment on the MS model <b class="">BEFORE</b>
                              the call. There is a document, and there
                              are comments on the document you might
                              want to address. If no one has issues with
                              the document or with my responses to
                              comments made to the document, then we
                              won't have much to discuss. I don't have
                              any slides to present. The document itself
                              will be our reference point.<br class="">
                            </font></p><p class=""><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit" class="" moz-do-not-send="true">https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit</a></p><p class="">Thanks</p><p class="">Marita<br class="">
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