<div dir="ltr">Christopher<div><br></div><div>You have time to put in a personal submission. I can appreciate what Marita is saying that the current statement has been formed by discussion within the CPWG over a number of calls and cannot easily be changed without consultation and possible changes that there is no time to make. </div><div><br></div><div>Perhaps in the executive summary it may state that a late alternative view was proposed and an individual submission to the public comment has been suggested.</div><div><br></div><div>Maureen</div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, May 31, 2019 at 7:59 AM Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Christopher,</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Evin needs to have
this by this weekend in order to process the thing on time. So,
it will be over by Wednesday's call. <br>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">And "no other
comments" cannot be assumed as support for your intervention. As
the chief penholder, I feel the need to reflect the content
properly in the summary, not start another discussion. Unless
other people chime in, that's my position.</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Marita<br>
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<div class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On 5/31/2019 1:00 PM,
<a class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a> wrote:<br>
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Dear Marita:
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<div>Thankyou. However, since there is not a final text
of the Executive Summary, I would wish to maintain my proposed
draft.</div>
<div>There is another CPWG on Wednesday evening (19.00
UTC) when we could review this and any other eventual proposals.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>I consider that my draft does in fact support the
body of the opinion. I note that there have been no other
comments meanwhile.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>I can’t apologise for coming in ‘late’ to this;
recent CPWG schedules have been very challenging here for
several reasons. Furthermore, a lot of time has been spent on
EPDP, whereas in the longer term multi-stakeholder strategy is
far more important.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>I maintain my comment.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Best regards</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Christopher.<br>
<div><br>
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<div>On 31 May 2019, at 16:19, Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" target="_blank">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>> wrote:</div>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times,
serif">Hi Christopher. I totally think your points
are great -- but it has not been part of the
discussion we have had so far in three conference
calls so I don't feel, at this point, that I have
permission to pursue this line of thinking. The
summary needs to be a summary of what is already in
the body of the document, not an intro to another
document. <br>
</font></p>
<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times,
serif">We might be able to use it in the next
iteration of this exercise which will not end here.
<br>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times,
serif">Marita</font><br>
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<div class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On 5/29/2019 2:10 PM, <a class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
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PS: In the penultimate line, replace’ organisation’
by’ community'.
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<div>CW<br>
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<div>On 29 May 2019, at 20:00, <a href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a>
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<div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;">Good evening,
Further to today's CPWG Call, I would like
to submit the following text as a
contribution fo the Executive Summary:
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<div> … still to be completed …
<p style="margin-bottom:0in" lang="en-US">"Otherwise, the
international perception of our unique
experiment in multi-stakeholder
governance will be undermined. Indeed
the imbalances within the ICANN
community – described and discussed in
this paper – go well beyond
dysfunctional consensus building, and
nowadays have significant economic,
political and social consequences which
disproportionately privilege incumbent
stakeholders at the expense of others,
both present and in the future, within
and beyond the ICANN structure.</p>
<p style="margin-bottom:0in" lang="en-US">The current review of
Evolving ICANN's Multi-stakeholder Model
needs to look well beyond the internal
relationships between the Supporting
Organisations and Advisory Committees,
and address the question as to how the
present arrangements are viewed more
widely, elsewhere in the world.<br>
<br>
In most other regulated sectors of
activity, companies and public
authorities expect the allocation and
supervision of public resources to
benefit from decisions taken by
independent agencies which are normally
careful to avoid conflicts of interest,
insider trading or collusion among
incumbents. Insofar as ICANN is nowadays
managing the allocation, and supervising
the use of, quite vast economic
resources, our present structure and
performance likely appears to many as
quite unusual.<br>
<br>
Thus, arguably, the declared advantages
of the multi-stakeholder model no longer
outweigh, in our case, the disadvantages
arising from the particular structure
that has evolved in ICANN during the
past two decades, and which are
discussed in some detail in this report.
Accordingly the necessary rebalancing of
participation and powers within the
ICANN organisation is in fact an
essential factor in global internet
Governance (IG) at large. It would also
enhance the efficiency and transparency
of our decisions and policies."</p>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Regards</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Christopher Wilkinson</div>
<div><br>
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<div>PS: I shall endeavour to
post this text to the Wiki as a Comment
later today.</div>
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<div>On 29 May 2019, at
02:40, Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" target="_blank">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>>
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<p><font face="Times New Roman, Times,
serif">Hello cpwg members.
Please take a look at the
google doc re: comment on the
MS model <b>BEFORE</b>
the call. There is a document,
and there are comments on the
document you might want to
address. If no one has issues
with the document or with my
responses to comments made to
the document, then we won't
have much to discuss. I don't
have any slides to present.
The document itself will be
our reference point.<br>
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<p><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/13nLdYeIB2wbTERgBdiE55z0RnM69F-nSXbrF4RwUZaQ/edit</a></p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>Marita<br>
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