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<p>Dear Christopher and All,<br>
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<p>Thank you all for your input - to confirm, I acknowledged receipt of Christopher's comments on the mailing list and thanked him for contributing. I am not endorsing anyone's specific comments, but encouraging them all!<br>
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<p>I will draft the cover letter to the statement shortly, and will coordinate with Marita and the penholders on sending to comment in the coming days.<br>
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<p>Best,<br>
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<p>Evin<br>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000" style="font-size:11pt"><b>From:</b> cw@christopherwilkinson.eu <cw@christopherwilkinson.eu><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, May 31, 2019 8:04 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Maureen Hilyard<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Marita Moll; cpwg@icann.org; Evin Erdogdu; Nigel Hickson; comex@wallonie-isoc.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ext] Re: [CPWG] [registration-issues-wg] tomorrow's discussion re: multistakeholder model</font>
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<div>Dear Maureen: I don’t quite understand the urgency of these deadlines, perhaps I have missed something.
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<div class="">In any event, a final ‘official’ Executive Summary has not yet been proposed. <I would like to see that, even if my contribution is attenuated (or ignored.)</div>
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<div class="">As I said on the Wiki, I think that Siva’s encouragement for MS governance, actually goes too far in the face of the shortcomings of ICANN’s MS structures, as described in the report. I also believe that it goes beyond anything that
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<div class="">ALS - ISOC Wallonia BE.</div>
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<div class="">PS: Evin for the Staff, actually acknowledged receipt of my draft, quite positively. </div>
<div class="">But community consensus should take precedence … </div>
<div class="">Thank you Evin!!</div>
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<div class="">On 31 May 2019, at 21:20, Maureen Hilyard <<a href="mailto:maureen.hilyard@gmail.com" class="">maureen.hilyard@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">You have time to put in a personal submission. I can appreciate what Marita is saying that the current statement has been formed by discussion within the CPWG over a number of calls and cannot easily be changed without consultation and possible
changes that there is no time to make. </div>
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<div class="">Perhaps in the executive summary it may state that a late alternative view was proposed and an individual submission to the public comment has been suggested.</div>
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<div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Fri, May 31, 2019 at 7:59 AM Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" class="">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>> wrote:<br class="">
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<p class=""><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" class="">Dear Christopher,</font></p>
<p class=""><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" class="">Evin needs to have this by this weekend in order to process the thing on time. So, it will be over by Wednesday's call.
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<p class=""><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" class="">And "no other comments" cannot be assumed as support for your intervention. As the chief penholder, I feel the need to reflect the content properly in the summary, not start another discussion.
Unless other people chime in, that's my position.</font></p>
<p class=""><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" class="">Marita<br class="">
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<div class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On 5/31/2019 1:00 PM, <a class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">
cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a> wrote:<br class="">
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<blockquote type="cite" class="">Dear Marita:
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<div class="">Thankyou. However, since there is not a final text of the Executive Summary, I would wish to maintain my proposed draft.</div>
<div class="">There is another CPWG on Wednesday evening (19.00 UTC) when we could review this and any other eventual proposals.</div>
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<div class="">I consider that my draft does in fact support the body of the opinion. I note that there have been no other comments meanwhile.</div>
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<div class="">I can’t apologise for coming in ‘late’ to this; recent CPWG schedules have been very challenging here for several reasons. Furthermore, a lot of time has been spent on EPDP, whereas in the longer term multi-stakeholder strategy is far more important.</div>
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<div class="">I maintain my comment.</div>
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<div class="">On 31 May 2019, at 16:19, Marita Moll <<a href="mailto:mmoll@ca.inter.net" target="_blank" class="">mmoll@ca.inter.net</a>> wrote:</div>
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serif" class="">Hi Christopher. I totally think your points are great -- but it has not been part of the discussion we have had so far in three conference calls so I don't feel, at this point,
that I have permission to pursue this line of thinking. The summary needs to be a summary of what is already in the body of the document, not an intro to another document.
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serif" class="">We might be able to use it in the next iteration of this exercise which will not end here.
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<div class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-cite-prefix">On 5/29/2019 2:10 PM, <a class="gmail-m_-5540171618400643363moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank">
cw@christopherwilkinson.eu</a> wrote:<br class="">
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<blockquote type="cite" class="">PS: In the penultimate line, replace’ organisation’ by’ community'.
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<div class="">On 29 May 2019, at 20:00, <a href="mailto:cw@christopherwilkinson.eu" target="_blank" class="">
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<div class="" style="">Good evening, Further to today's CPWG Call, I would like to submit the following text as a contribution fo the Executive Summary:
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<p lang="en-US" class="" style="margin-bottom:0in">"Otherwise, the international perception of our unique experiment in multi-stakeholder governance will be undermined. Indeed the imbalances within the ICANN community – described and discussed in this paper
– go well beyond dysfunctional consensus building, and nowadays have significant economic, political and social consequences which disproportionately privilege incumbent stakeholders at the expense of others, both present and in the future, within and beyond
the ICANN structure.</p>
<p lang="en-US" class="" style="margin-bottom:0in">The current review of Evolving ICANN's Multi-stakeholder Model needs to look well beyond the internal relationships between the Supporting Organisations and Advisory Committees, and address the question as
to how the present arrangements are viewed more widely, elsewhere in the world.<br class="">
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In most other regulated sectors of activity, companies and public authorities expect the allocation and supervision of public resources to benefit from decisions taken by independent agencies which are normally careful to avoid conflicts of interest, insider
trading or collusion among incumbents. Insofar as ICANN is nowadays managing the allocation, and supervising the use of, quite vast economic resources, our present structure and performance likely appears to many as quite unusual.<br class="">
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Thus, arguably, the declared advantages of the multi-stakeholder model no longer outweigh, in our case, the disadvantages arising from the particular structure that has evolved in ICANN during the past two decades, and which are discussed in some detail in
this report. Accordingly the necessary rebalancing of participation and powers within the ICANN organisation is in fact an essential factor in global internet Governance (IG) at large. It would also enhance the efficiency and transparency of our decisions
and policies."</p>
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<div class="">PS: I shall endeavour to post this text to the Wiki as a Comment later today.</div>
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<p class=""><font face="Times New Roman, Times,
serif" class="">Hello cpwg members. Please take a look at the google doc re: comment on the MS model
<b class="">BEFORE</b> the call. There is a document, and there are comments on the document you might want to address. If no one has issues with the document or with my responses to comments made to the document, then we won't have much to discuss. I don't
have any slides to present. The document itself will be our reference point.<br class="">
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