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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi all, apologies that I did not have time to comment on the draft before now. I am proposing a couple of small amendments in the attached edited version of the redline.
The first is in the Executive Summary on pages 4/5 where I am suggesting moving some text which I think makes the summary flow better. The second suggested edit is in 5.1.5 to address a comment made by the IPC. I would be happy to explain further on the
WG call tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> ctn-crosscom-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ctn-crosscom-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Bart Boswinkel<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 02 June 2017 15:05<br>
<b>To:</b> ctn-crosscom@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Ctn-crosscom] Next call CCWG - CTN: Tuesday, 6 June 2017 at 05:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Please find included the latest version of the draft final paper (redline and clean).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Following the last call of the WG, staff circualted the draft final paper version 01, and send two reminders.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Until yesterday we have received one comment (from Jaap), which is included. The comment relates to wording around how ISO organizes its work with respect to ISO 3166 (and is included in this
version).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Per charter (<a href="https://ccnso.icann.org/workinggroups/unct-framework-charter-27mar14-en.pdf">https://ccnso.icann.org/workinggroups/unct-framework-charter-27mar14-en.pdf</a>) this is the
second reading with respect to the proposed changes to the Interim paper.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Bart<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:14.0pt">Proposed Agenda 6 June 2017 call:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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