[client com] FW: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2

[Jonathan Robinson]

All,

 

Here is the current version of the proposal. Please note that, as per
Marika's point below, it is not yet complete so a further version is still
required ahead of tomorrow's call.

 

Thanks,

 

Jonathan

 

From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org] 
Sent: 03 June 2015 15:32
To: cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2

 

Apologies, someone just pointed out I attached the wrong document. Please
find attached version 2. You can ignore the document I sent you in the
previous email, the work on the public comment review tool has not been
completed yet.

 

Best regards,

 

Marika

 

From: Marika Konings <marika.konings at icann.org>
Date: Wednesday 3 June 2015 16:08
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
Subject: For your review - CWG-Stewardship Proposal v2

 

Dear All,

 

Please find attached version 2 of the proposal for your review which
includes amongst others:

*	Jonathan's edits
*	Paragraph 102 - CWG edits
*	Paragraph 106 - Martin addition
*	Paragraph 111- Martin addition
*	Paragraph 150 - CWG edits
*	Paragraph 226 (Annex F) - Martin addition
*	Paragraph 233 table - Martin addition
*	Updated Section VI 
*	Updates from DT F concerning root zone maintainer and root zone
environment
*	Suggested changes to address Andrew's comments in paragraph 96 and
107
*	Updates to Annex F
*	Updates to Annex J per DT M's feedback

Please note that there are still some outstanding items that we expect to
update as soon as input is received, for example from DT C concerning the
CSC Charter, paragraph 123 (note action item for Avri), outstanding issue in
Annex J under discussion by DT M and C, DT A input concerning Annex H, but
we already wanted to give you an opportunity to review these latests
updates. Furthermore, we will continue working on proofreading and
formatting of the document and annexes. 

 

Please share any comments and/or edits you have with the mailing list.

 

Best regards,

 

Marika 

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