[client com] Fwd: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool

[Greg Shatan]

Sharon, Holly and team,

I'm forwarding you the public comment review materials.  Before launching
into an extended review of these, we should probably discuss the best and
most cost-effective approach for Sidley to take with regard to all this.
 (Apologies if I somehow missed any earlier decisions on how to handle.)

Best regards,

Greg

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
Date: Fri, May 22, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and
review tool
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
Cc: Brenda Brewer <brenda.brewer at icann.org>


Dear all,

Staff has compiled a summary overview of the pubic comment submissions and
filled out a public comment review tool, noting responses and specific
action items for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these
documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment
submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted
in *blue* in the response column (far right).

The Public Comment Review Tool is very long and may be difficult to read.
This is due to staff’s approach in thorough and detailed review. *We will
provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for
Tuesday’s meeting. *We are providing the long version to you today to
demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week’s
high-intensity meetings.

While the Public Comment Review Tool is very detailed, the summary overview
is presented in a presentation format and focuses more on the “bigger
picture”. Depending on your review-style, you may be inclined to start with
one or the other document.

Also, please note that these documents incorporate all (44) submissions
received up until the deadline on 20 May at 23:59 UTC. As of 22 May at
16:00 UTC, there are (7) late submissions. These submissions have not yet
been incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the
high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on
the extension for those who are reliant on translations).

As a reminder, Brenda kindly pulled all the submissions together on the
Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw. You can download all the files
at once (like a zip file) by clicking on the “download all” button at the
bottom left side of the macro.

Have a good (submission-reading-filled) weekend,
Grace

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