[client com] Fwd: [Iana-ipr] Revised IANA IPR Community Agreement

[Greg Shatan]

Client Committee,

Here are a few changes I suggested based on the draft circulated most
recently.

Greg
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From: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
Date: Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Subject: Re: [Iana-ipr] Revised IANA IPR Community Agreement
To: Alan Barrett <alan.barrett at afrinic.net>
Cc: Jorge Contreras <contreraslegal at att.net>, "iana-ipr at nro.net" <
iana-ipr at nro.net>


All,

I have a few changes and comments in the attached.  Most, if not all,
should be noncontroversial.  They are marked in track changes on top of
Jorge's changes, along with a couple of marginal comments (i.e., appearing
in the margin, not necessarily of marginal value).

Greg

On Wed, Aug 10, 2016 at 1:38 AM, Alan Barrett <alan.barrett at afrinic.net>
wrote:

>
> > On 10 Aug 2016, at 05:41, Jorge Contreras <contreraslegal at att.net>
> wrote:
> >
> > All – here is a revised version of the Community Agreement reflecting
> feedback from our Monday call, as well as separate comments received from
> CWG and IETF.  I hope that I have reflected everything accurately, and look
> forward to discussing any final changes before public release tomorrow.
>
> I have just noticed that the list of domain names in this Community
> Agreement document includes only iana.com, iana.net, and iana.org, but
> some other documents included “internetassignednumbersauthority” domain
> names.  I suggest that the lists in all document should be identical.
>
> Alan Barrett
>
>
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