[client com] IANA IPR License & Community Agreement Template

Sat Jul 23 00:47:53 UTC 2016

Attached in track changes are my comments to the Community Agreement.

We should endeavor to harmonize and conform this to the License Agreement.
I've done this in a few places, but please keep an eye out for other
instances.

Greg

On Thu, Jul 21, 2016 at 7:29 PM, Hofheimer, Joshua T. <jhofheimer at sidley.com
> wrote:

> Client Committee and Greg, etc. – We have accepted Greg’s changes and made
> a few further clean-up revisions.  For convenience we have included a clean
> and redline marked against the original draft sent to us.
>
>
>
> Regarding the final changes:
>
> ·        we’ve deleted footnotes that have now become moot,
>
> ·        fixed the formatting,
>
> ·        edited footnotes per Greg’s comments,
>
> ·        moved a couple of Greg’s margin notes into footnotes (e.g., his
> query about IETF being an Affiliate), and
>
> ·        made a few text edits for consistency (e.g. changing
> unreasonably “denied” to “withheld” to be consistent with other parts of
> the document).
>
>
>
> If the Client Committee is satisfied, I am happy for this to go to IETF so
> they can review in advance of our call on Tuesday.  We can discuss in the
> morning.  For me the most material issue, which impacts the document in
> several places is whether the IETF should have the unilateral right to
> assess or require changes in services, and terminate the license if
> unsatisfied with those changes.  As we’ve noted previously, we don’t
> believe that is appropriate, but will take CWG’s guidance.
>
>
>
> I know we have a brief client committee call scheduled for tomorrow
> morning on IPR, so we can discuss this and any other issues, as well as
> next steps.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Josh
>
>
>
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> *From:* Greg Shatan [mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com]
> *Sent:* Thursday, July 21, 2016 12:31 AM
> *To:* Hofheimer, Joshua T.
> *Cc:* Client Committee; Greeley, Amy E.
> *Subject:* Re: [client com] IANA IPR License & Community Agreement
> Template
>
>
>
> Client Committee and Josh et al.,
>
>
>
> I have reviewed Sidley's comments on the License Agreement and generally
> agree with them. I have further revised the License Agreement in the
> attached document, both to carry out certain of Sidley's comments, to
> reflect comments of my own and to follow more closely the Principal Terms.
> My changes are marked in track changes.  I look forward to any thoughts you
> may have.
>
>
>
> This version (subject to any further comments or discussions, and clean-up
> and consolidation by Sidley) should be turned back to the IETF Trust and
> other operational communities sufficiently in advance of the July 26 call
> so that this version can form the basis of the discussions on that call.
> Thoughts on process are most welcome.
>
>
>
> I hope to review the Community Agreement shortly.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Greg
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> On Tue, Jul 19, 2016 at 1:28 AM, Hofheimer, Joshua T. <
> jhofheimer at sidley.com> wrote:
>
> Dear Client Committee,
>
>
>
> Attached please find Sidley comments to the IANA IPR License and to the
> Community Agreement, clean and redline against the original drafts we
> received from Greg Shatan.  Please note there are several questions and
> comments for consideration included as footnote “Notes to Draft”.
>
>
>
> We are happy to discuss at your convenience.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Josh
>
>
>
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