[client com] IANA IPR License & Community Agreement Template

Sat Jul 23 01:08:58 UTC 2016

Finally, I attach a cumulative redline, showing all changes to the original
draft circulated by the IETF Trust.

On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 9:01 PM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
wrote:

> For convenience, I'm also attaching clean and marked versions, marked to
> show changes to Sidley's revised draft.
>
> Greg
>
> On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 8:47 PM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Attached in track changes are my comments to the Community Agreement.
>>
>> We should endeavor to harmonize and conform this to the License
>> Agreement.  I've done this in a few places, but please keep an eye out for
>> other instances.
>>
>> Greg
>>
>> On Thu, Jul 21, 2016 at 7:29 PM, Hofheimer, Joshua T. <
>> jhofheimer at sidley.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Client Committee and Greg, etc. – We have accepted Greg’s changes and
>>> made a few further clean-up revisions.  For convenience we have included a
>>> clean and redline marked against the original draft sent to us.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Regarding the final changes:
>>>
>>> ·        we’ve deleted footnotes that have now become moot,
>>>
>>> ·        fixed the formatting,
>>>
>>> ·        edited footnotes per Greg’s comments,
>>>
>>> ·        moved a couple of Greg’s margin notes into footnotes (e.g.,
>>> his query about IETF being an Affiliate), and
>>>
>>> ·        made a few text edits for consistency (e.g. changing
>>> unreasonably “denied” to “withheld” to be consistent with other parts of
>>> the document).
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> If the Client Committee is satisfied, I am happy for this to go to IETF
>>> so they can review in advance of our call on Tuesday.  We can discuss in
>>> the morning.  For me the most material issue, which impacts the document in
>>> several places is whether the IETF should have the unilateral right to
>>> assess or require changes in services, and terminate the license if
>>> unsatisfied with those changes.  As we’ve noted previously, we don’t
>>> believe that is appropriate, but will take CWG’s guidance.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> I know we have a brief client committee call scheduled for tomorrow
>>> morning on IPR, so we can discuss this and any other issues, as well as
>>> next steps.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>>
>>> Josh
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *Joshua Hofheimer*
>>>
>>> *Sidley Austin LLP*
>>>
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>>>
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>>>
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>>>
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>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *From:* Greg Shatan [mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com]
>>> *Sent:* Thursday, July 21, 2016 12:31 AM
>>> *To:* Hofheimer, Joshua T.
>>> *Cc:* Client Committee; Greeley, Amy E.
>>> *Subject:* Re: [client com] IANA IPR License & Community Agreement
>>> Template
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Client Committee and Josh et al.,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> I have reviewed Sidley's comments on the License Agreement and generally
>>> agree with them. I have further revised the License Agreement in the
>>> attached document, both to carry out certain of Sidley's comments, to
>>> reflect comments of my own and to follow more closely the Principal Terms.
>>> My changes are marked in track changes.  I look forward to any thoughts you
>>> may have.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> This version (subject to any further comments or discussions, and
>>> clean-up and consolidation by Sidley) should be turned back to the IETF
>>> Trust and other operational communities sufficiently in advance of the July
>>> 26 call so that this version can form the basis of the discussions on that
>>> call.  Thoughts on process are most welcome.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> I hope to review the Community Agreement shortly.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Greg
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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>>>
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>>>
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>>>
>>>
>>> On Tue, Jul 19, 2016 at 1:28 AM, Hofheimer, Joshua T. <
>>> jhofheimer at sidley.com> wrote:
>>>
>>> Dear Client Committee,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Attached please find Sidley comments to the IANA IPR License and to the
>>> Community Agreement, clean and redline against the original drafts we
>>> received from Greg Shatan.  Please note there are several questions and
>>> comments for consideration included as footnote “Notes to Draft”.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> We are happy to discuss at your convenience.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>>
>>> Josh
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *JOSHUA T. HOFHEIMER*
>>> Partner
>>>
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>>> jhofheimer at sidley.com
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>>>
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>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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