[client com] ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers

[Hofheimer, Joshua T.]

Client Committee -- Attached is a further revised draft of Sidley’s comments to the Naming Functions Agreement.  For convenience, we have included a clean Word version, a cumulative PDF redline against the ICANN draft, and an internal redline against the version we sent yesterday.

Please note, we have not undertaken a formal review of the Naming Functions Agreement against Annex C.  We are looking for guidance from the CWG as to whether the provisions that the CWG drafted to implement Annex C (as described in the Implementation Proposal dated June 9, 2016) will be incorporated in the bylaws or the naming function agreement.  Once this determination is made, we can ensure that the provisions are appropriately documented, if requested.

Cheers,
Josh

Joshua Hofheimer
Sidley Austin LLP
jhofheimer at sidley.com
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(650) 565-7561 (Palo Alto direct)
(323) 708-2405 (cell)

From: Hofheimer, Joshua T.
Sent: Monday, July 25, 2016 12:50 PM
To: 'Client Committee'
Cc: Resnick, Yael; Flanagan, Sharon; Gregory, Holly; Grapsas, Rebecca; Greeley, Amy E.
Subject: RE: ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers

Dear Client Committee – If you have not already started reviewing the attached, please hold for a few hours.  We will have a revised draft to you shortly with further observations on the connections to the ICANN Bylaws, and some additional revisions.

Thanks,
Josh

Joshua Hofheimer
Sidley Austin LLP
jhofheimer at sidley.com<mailto:jhofheimer at sidley.com>
(213) 896-6061 (LA direct)
(650) 565-7561 (Palo Alto direct)
(323) 708-2405 (cell)

From: Hofheimer, Joshua T.
Sent: Sunday, July 24, 2016 4:02 PM
To: Client Committee
Cc: Resnick, Yael; Flanagan, Sharon; Gregory, Holly; Grapsas, Rebecca; Greeley, Amy E.
Subject: ICANN-PTI Naming Functions Agreement & Services Agreement Headers

Dear Client Committee,

Attached please find proposed comments to the Naming Functions Agreement and the Services Agreement Headers, both clean and marked against the versions sent by ICANN.  Because the Services Agreement Headers received from ICANN was in PDF only, we converted to Word and added formatting.  However, this has made the redline look more atrocious than it actually is.  We are going to try to clean this up a little in the versions to go to ICANN, but did not want to delay getting feedback or comments from the community.

On the Naming Functions Agreement, we focused primarily on verifying the mapping exercise undertaken by ICANN to ensure the CWG’s views and conditions have been incorporated.  Where the proposed draft appears to be lacking or inconsistent, we have noted with questions, comments, and in some instances direct revisions.

Cheers,
Josh

JOSHUA T. HOFHEIMER
Partner

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