<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Sharon, Holly and team,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I'm forwarding you the public comment review materials. Before launching into an extended review of these, we should probably discuss the best and most cost-effective approach for Sidley to take with regard to all this. (Apologies if I somehow missed any earlier decisions on how to handle.)</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Best regards,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Grace Abuhamad</b> <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org">grace.abuhamad@icann.org</a>></span><br>Date: Fri, May 22, 2015 at 2:34 PM<br>Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool<br>To: "<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br>Cc: Brenda Brewer <<a href="mailto:brenda.brewer@icann.org">brenda.brewer@icann.org</a>><br><br><br>
<div style="word-wrap:break-word;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Dear all, </div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px"><br></div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">Staff has compiled a summary overview of the pubic comment submissions and filled out a public comment review tool, noting responses and specific action items for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted in <span style="background-color:rgb(0,255,255)"><i><b>blue</b></i></span> in the response column (far right). </div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px"><br></div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">The Public Comment Review Tool is very long and may be difficult to read. This is due to staff’s approach in thorough and detailed review. <b>We will provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for Tuesday’s meeting. </b>We are providing the long version to you today to demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week’s high-intensity meetings. </div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px"><br></div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(0,0,0);font-size:14px">While the Public Comment Review Tool is very detailed, the summary overview is presented in a presentation format and focuses more on the “bigger picture”. Depending on your review-style, you may be inclined to start with one or the other document. </div><div style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><br></div><div><font face="Calibri,sans-serif">Also, </font><span style="font-family:Calibri">please note that these documents incorporate all <font color="#ff0000">(44) submissions received up until the deadline on 20 May at
23:59 UTC</font>. </span>As of 22 May at 16:00 UTC, there are (7) late
submissions. These submissions have not yet been incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on the extension<span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><font> for those who are reliant on translations). </font></span></span></div><div><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><font><br></font></span></span></div><div><span style="font-family:Calibri,sans-serif"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><font>As a reminder, </font></span></span>Brenda kindly pulled all the submissions together on the Wiki: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw" style="color:purple" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw</a>. You can download all the files at once (like a zip file) by clicking on the “download all” button at the bottom left side of the macro. </div><div><br></div><div>Have a good (submission-reading-filled) weekend, </div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><div>Grace</div></font></span></div>
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