<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Finally, I attach a cumulative redline, showing all changes to the original draft circulated by the IETF Trust.</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 9:01 PM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">For convenience, I'm also attaching clean and marked versions, marked to show changes to Sidley's revised draft.</div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></font></span></div><div class="HOEnZb"><div class="h5"><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Jul 22, 2016 at 8:47 PM, Greg Shatan <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Attached in track changes are my comments to the Community Agreement.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">We should endeavor to harmonize and conform this to the License Agreement. I've done this in a few places, but please keep an eye out for other instances.</div><span><font color="#888888"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></font></span></div><div><div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Jul 21, 2016 at 7:29 PM, Hofheimer, Joshua T. <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:jhofheimer@sidley.com" target="_blank">jhofheimer@sidley.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Client Committee and Greg, etc. – We have accepted Greg’s changes and made a few further clean-up revisions. For convenience we have included a clean and redline
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Regarding the final changes:
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">we’ve deleted footnotes that have now become moot,
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">edited footnotes per Greg’s comments,
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">moved a couple of Greg’s margin notes into footnotes (e.g., his query about IETF being an Affiliate), and
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</span></span></span><u></u><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">made a few text edits for consistency (e.g. changing unreasonably “denied” to “withheld” to be consistent with other parts of the document).<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">If the Client Committee is satisfied, I am happy for this to go to IETF so they can review in advance of our call on Tuesday. We can discuss in the morning.
For me the most material issue, which impacts the document in several places is whether the IETF should have the unilateral right to assess or require changes in services, and terminate the license if unsatisfied with those changes. As we’ve noted previously,
we don’t believe that is appropriate, but will take CWG’s guidance. <u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">I know we have a brief client committee call scheduled for tomorrow morning on IPR, so we can discuss this and any other issues, as well as next steps.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Cheers,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<b>Subject:</b> Re: [client com] IANA IPR License & Community Agreement Template<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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“Notes to Draft”.<u></u><u></u></p>
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