[CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!)
Gomes, Chuck
cgomes at verisign.com
Tue Aug 12 22:37:16 UTC 2014
With the exception of Byron's promised word-smithing that he promised and the changes to the title that Allan suggested, which should also be made within the document where applicable, I think this is ready to go.
Chuck
From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad
Sent: Monday, August 11, 2014 10:00 PM
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Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!)
Hi all,
Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean).
I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference:
* Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives" section)
* Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2 of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion.
* Section IV:
* Included Stephanie's text.
* Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources" (Grace/Staff).
* Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the text in the charter?).
Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder.
Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!).
Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call.
- Grace
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