<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">Dear All,<div><br></div><div>I have been through the document again and made some updates/changes some of which are just trivial word-smithing (re-ordering, cutting out duplication, etc) but some a bit more substantive. To summarise, I have:</div><div> </div><div>Defined the core deliverable as "<b><span lang="EN-US">IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal related to the Naming Functions"</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> (the Proposal) (Thanks Tijani for pointing out that we'd actually missed that!)</span></div>
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<!--StartFragment--><!--EndFragment--><div>Standardized on using the term "chartering organizations" rather than "participating organizations", "participating stakeholders" or "participating SOs and ACs"</div><div>Replaced "working group" or "Working Group" with "CWG", after defining the acronym in the first instance</div><div>Replaced "Coordinating Group" with "ICG", after defining the acronym in the first instance</div><div>Made sure that all references to the "Proposal" are in the singular and not plural</div><div>Inserted Tijani's proposed definitions for 'Full Consensus' and 'Consensus' as there seemed to be fairly general support for these.</div><div>I have tried to make sense in my own mind of the reference to a "supplemental paper" and have represented this as a type of updated draft. However, I'm not fully convinced that this extra round of submission and approval is strictly necessary. Having said that, perhaps there is something about this proposed process that I've misunderstood.</div><div>I also note that we have not addressed the issue of submitting the Final Proposal to the ICG, so I have left this as something to be negotiated between the CWG co-chairs and the ICG reps. As I see it, there are a couple of ways in which this could happen...either our ICG Reps take the Final Proposal to the ICG Table, or the CWG Co-chairs deliver it to the ICG co-chairs (or maybe even both??). </div><div><br></div><div>Anyway, I have done this as an updated document which is now very heavy with track changes, but I thought to do it any other way just creates work for someone to update the document later on. Please do feel free to comment/criticise as you see fit. Just trying to move the process along as quickly as possible.</div><div><br></div><div>Must stop before it drives me crazy!!!</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers, Julie</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html>