<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000; font-size:10pt;"><div>Hi Stephanie:</div><div><br></div><div>This is very good work and is organized in a way and is in enough detail to use as a substantive discussion reference. I've made several comments that are intended as constructive and also intended to flesh out the proposal. </div><div><br></div><div>I made the comments to this proposal rather than the spreadsheet containing all four proposals but they would apply to others as well. (I apologize to whomever is responsible for taking all these comments starting on Monday to collate.) </div><div><br></div><div>Regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Kurt</div><div><br></div><div><br></div>
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Subject: [CWG-RFP3] Proposed Redline to Strawman 1<br>
From: "Duchesneau, Stephanie" <<a href="mailto:Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us">Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us</a>><br>
Date: Fri, November 14, 2014 1:50 pm<br>
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</style> <div class="WordSection1"> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><a target="_blank" name="OLE_LINK1"></a><a target="_blank" name="OLE_LINK2">Hi All,<o:p></o:p></a></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Please find attached a redline, suggesting changes and additions to Greg’s Strawman 1 model. The strawman reflects input from several gTLD registry representatives to this group. As the redline is fairly heavy, I have incorporated a clean version as well as a version that tracks all changes made to the original version that Greg provided. The draft also includes some comments on a few of the areas that will require further thought and development.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">I will also work to reflect these recommendations in the Google Docs that compares the strawmen. We encourage members of this group to review this document and provide any feedback on the updated strawman. <o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Best.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Stephanie<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;margin-top:12.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#262626">Stephanie Duchesneau</span></b><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#3366FF"> <br> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">Neustar, Inc. / </span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#7D7D7D">Public Policy Manager<br> 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, 4<sup>th</sup> Floor, Washington, DC 20006</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:gray"><br> </span><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">Office:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#333333"> </span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#7D7D7D">+1.202.533.2623 </span><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">Mobile: </span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#7D7D7D">+1.703.731.2040</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:gray"> </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#000066"> </span><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">Fax: </span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#7D7D7D">+1.202.533.2623</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:gray"> </span><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">/</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658"> </span><a target="_blank" href="http://www.neustar.biz/"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#068658">www.neustar.biz</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:gray"> <o:p></o:p></span></div> <div> <div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";color:#7D7D7D"> <hr size="1" width="100%" noshade="" style="color:#969696" align="left"> </span></div> </div> </div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="font-size:8.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#7D7D7D">The information contained in this email message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this email message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message.</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";color:#7D7D7D"><o:p></o:p></span></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> </div> <hr>_______________________________________________<br>
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