[CWG-Stewardship] IANA Stewardship Transition CWG RFP Section 2A Proposal ­ 3 November 2014 Draft

[Gomes, Chuck]

Thanks Marika.  The edits you proposed seem non-controversial and
constructive so I suggest that Staff makes them.  Regarding your comment on
Source E, I think it would be good to add the date that the major revisions
were made to the GNSO PDP in parentheses after the original date.

 

Am I correct in assuming that Staff will create a redline version 2 that
will highlight all the changes made to what I submitted to the CWG list?  It
probably would be good to wait until about 10 November to finalize version 2
with all edits that are made and then send it to the CWG list.  Those edits
can then be accepted and subsequent edits redlined for a version 3 if needed
before CWG meeting 6. (I am sure you are way ahead of me on this, but I am
saying this for the benefit of everyone on the CWG list.)

 

During today’s call, we found an error that I commented on in the table in
‘2. Delegation and re-delegation of gTLDs’.  A column needs to be added in
the ‘Done by’ section after the ‘IANA column’ titled ‘RZM’ with a footnote
that says, RZM = Root Zone Maintainer and an ‘x’ needs to be added in that
column for step 2-8.

 

Chuck

 

From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings at icann.org] 
Sent: Tuesday, November 04, 2014 8:49 AM
To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] IANA Stewardship Transition CWG RFP Section
2A Proposal ­ 3 November 2014 Draft
Importance: High

 

Chuck, sub-team members,

 

Thanks for all your hard work on this document. Please find attached for
your consideration some suggested edits in relation to the sections
concerning the GNSO Policy Development Process.

 

Best regards,

 

Marika

 

From: <Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <cgomes at verisign.com>
Date: Monday 3 November 2014 23:22
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] IANA Stewardship Transition CWG RFP Section 2A
Proposal – 3 November 2014 Draft

 

Attached is a copy of the IANA Stewardship Transition CWG RFP Section 2A
Proposal from Subgroup 1-2A-2B for review and comment by the full CWG.  Note
that there is one section that is still being worked and that is noted in
this draft; hopefully that work will be completed this week.

 

Lise has asked me to provide an overview of this as well as for the Section
1 draft that was distributed to the CWG list last Friday in the CWG meeting
tomorrow.  I will be happy to respond to any questions you have in the
meeting tomorrow as well as on the list, and I am sure that other members of
the subgroup would be happy to do the same.

 

The subgroup will continue to serve as a resource for Sections 1 and 2A as
the full CWG reviews them.  We are currently working on Section 2B and hope
to have a draft for that by the end of the week.

 

I believe that all three sections will provide very helpful context for the
work going on in Subgroup 3.

 

Finally, let me acknowledge the members of our subgroup:

 

·         Allan MacGillivray (ccNSO)

·         Chuck Gomes (GNSO) – Rapporteur/Coordinator

·         Kieren McCarthy

·         Seun Ojedeji (ALAC)

·         Tracy Hackshaw (GAC)

·         Fouad Bajwa (ALAC)

·         Olivier Crépin-Leblond (ALAC)

·         Paul Kane (ccTLD)

·         Holly Raiche (ALAC)

·         Martin Boyle (ccNSO)

·         Sivasubramanian Muthusamy (ALAC)

·         Phil Corwin (GNSO) 

I also want to express thanks to Bernie Turcotte because he has been an
invaluable asset in the staff support he has provided to our team.  And
special thanks need to be said to Kieren for using his excellent writing
abilities and spending  extremely long hours editing our documents.

 

We are not done with our work yet, but it has been a good team effort so
far.

 

Chuck


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