[CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined edits

[Bernard Turcotte]

Milton,

Per Chuck's request please find the answer to some of your
questions/suggestions in the attached document.

Please advise if you have any questions.

Thanks

B.

On Wed, Nov 12, 2014 at 10:38 AM, Milton L Mueller <mueller at syr.edu> wrote:

>  Here are some proposed edits. The document also contains a few comments
> where additional edits might be made.
>
>
>
> *From:* cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
> cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Grace Abuhamad
> *Sent:* Tuesday, November 11, 2014 6:49 PM
> *To:* Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship at icann.org
> *Subject:* Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with
> redlined edits
> *Importance:* High
>
>
>
> All — I've uploaded the document to the Wiki here
> <https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/49352017/CWG-RFP2A-10NOVEDITS-RedLine.docx?api=v2>
> for your sharing/downloading convenience.
>
>
>
> *From: *<Gomes>, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, November 11, 2014 2:24 PM
> *To: *"cwg-stewardship at icann.org" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
> *Subject: *[CWG-Stewardship] Version 2 of RFP Section 2A with redlined
> edits
>
>
>
> Here is version 2 of the draft proposal in response to Section 2A of the
> ICG RFP; note that all edits made to the original version sent to the CWG
> list are redlined to make it easy for everyone to see the changes made.  If
> you proposed edits and they were not made, please speak up.
>
>
>
> Questions and comments are welcome on this list.  If you want to propose
> additional edits, please create a clean version of the file, make the edits
> on the clean version, save the file with your name and send it to this
> list.  We will create a version three the first of next week if needed.
>
>
>
> Thanks to Bernie for all the time he spent creating version 2.
>
>
>
> Chuck
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