[CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal

[Gomes, Chuck]

Thanks a lot Kurt for taking the time to do this.  Your suggested edits look constructive to me.  If no one communicates any reason why they shouldn’t be made, we will go ahead and make them.

Chuck


From: kurt at kjpritz.com [mailto:kurt at kjpritz.com]
Sent: Friday, November 14, 2014 3:57 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: RE: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal
Importance: High

Hi Chuck:

I have some proposed changes. Please accept them in the spirit they are proposed. The doc is good and sufficient as is so take these as you wish. If something is not clear, please contact me.

Kurt

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Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal
From: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes at verisign.com<mailto:cgomes at verisign.com>>
Date: Fri, November 14, 2014 11:15 am
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>>
All:  If you have edits to suggest in the 2B proposal, please make them using the attached version instead of the version I sent earlier.

Remember that any edits must be received not later than 1800 UTC and earlier would be better.

Chuck

From: Greg Shatan [mailto:gregshatanipc at gmail.com]
Sent: Friday, November 14, 2014 12:26 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck
Cc: cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>
Subject: Re: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal

Chuck and All,

I have attached a revised version RFP2B.  Primarily, I took certain sections of the text (primarily those involving lists) and converted those sections to tables.  Due to quirks in the interaction between tables and track changes, I did not make these changes in track changes.  However, I think it will be fairly obvious where these changes are, especially since there were no tables in this document beforehand.

One reason for this change is that, in preparing RFP3, we will need to consider how these existing aspects oversight and accountability will be dealt with in our transition proposal.  It will be easier to take these charts and add additional columns to show this.

I did make a few minor editing changes as well.  These are marked in track changes.

Greg Shatan



On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com<mailto:cgomes at verisign.com>> wrote:
Edits need to be received not later than 1800 UTC, Monday, 17 November.  Earlier would be appreciated.

Chuck

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Sent: Tuesday, November 11, 2014 8:19 AM
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Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] CWG RFP2B Proposal
Importance: High

Here is a draft of the ICG RFP Section 2B proposal for full CWG review and discussion.  Please make any suggested edits using the Word redlining function and save the file with your name before sending it to the CWG list.  Questions and comments  are also welcome on this list before you make edits.

Chuck
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