[CWG-Stewardship] Draft of Principles

[Gomes, Chuck]

Thanks Lise and Martin. Here is my feedback on the ‘Draft of Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship’.

Principle b.v says: “Performance against service level commitments and against the agreed policy base.  This should be monitored and there should be a mechanism to ensure that failures are corrected;”  The second sentence seems to me to be an ongoing action item once the service is implemented rather than a criterion for evaluating service options.  I think the first part could be worded into a principle but it needs some work.  Not being totally sure what was intended, I will leave it to Lise and/or Martin to edit it if my comment makes sense.

Chuck

From: cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Lise Fuhr
Sent: Wednesday, October 29, 2014 3:54 PM
To: cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Draft of Principles

Dear All,
As per the request from last week's call we have produced a list of the principles from the Charter of the CWG and the ICG (attached).
Also as discussed last week Martin Boyle and I have been elaborating a set of principles and/or the criteria against which we would review the proposals the CWG will be developing, in order to ensure that the proposal takes into account the different aspects that need to be covered.
The draft of those principles and/or criteria are also attached to this email for your consideration.
Given this is not directly in line with the work required to develop proposals I am suggesting that these should only be discussed on the mailing list for time being.
We will allocate time at the Face to Face meeting in Germany for us to consider the latest version of these as they will have evolved from discussions on the list.
Best regards,
Lise
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/cwg-stewardship/attachments/20141029/8b587ef3/attachment.html>