[CWG-Stewardship] Final Draft of Principles

[Seun Ojedeji]

Hi Greg,

Olive office on my android handled is obviously not displaying the footnote
referred. In anycase I am still fine with what you have noted so long as 9i
wordings is maintained as it currently is.

Regards

sent from Google nexus 4
kindly excuse brevity and typos.
On 6 Apr 2015 19:52, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> wrote:

> All.
>
> I have read this draft and I have no objections.  I have made a few
> non-substantive "clean-up" changes in the attached draft, picking up
> Eduardo's comments (though I did not find the "tabs" to be an issue),
> adding a couple of headings where the format of the document dictates it,
> making some very minor clarifying changes in the newly-revised title and
> intro paragraph, and fixing some typos.
>
> In response to Seun's comment, I note that footnote 1 defines the IANA
> functions operator as "the unit that provides the service."
>
> With these changes, I find the document acceptable.
>
> Greg Shatan
>
> On Mon, Apr 6, 2015 at 1:59 PM, Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Dear colleagues,
>>
>> I've read this draft of the principles, and I think it should be
>> accepted this way.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> A
>>
>> On Thu, Apr 02, 2015 at 06:50:09PM +0200, Lise Fuhr wrote:
>> > Dear All,
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > As announced at the CWG conference call today, the latest draft of the
>> > Principles is hereby sent to the list. Please be aware that there is a
>> > deadline for the conclusion of the Principles on Friday 10th of April,
>> and
>> > we have had several iterations on the document.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > As Martin Boyle mentioned in his email of March 24th , this is a
>> compromise
>> > among many parties, so please have this in mind when reading.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > I resend the redlined version with comments and a clean version. If no
>> > objections are posted online by Friday April 10th , 12:00 UTC, the
>> > Principles will be considered as finalized and agreed upon by the CWG.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Best regards,
>> >
>> > Lise
>> >
>>
>>
>>
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