[CWG-Stewardship] For your review - version V3.3

[Avri Doria]

Hi,

Marika, apologies for yet another edit.  Do not know it it is too late,
but responding to the issues in the current draft.

DT-N worked on both Annex F and Annex L trying to make them consistent.

- Worked of the escalation triggers.
  - CSC + a super-majority of ccNSO and GNSO can trigger the IFR
  - the IFRT can trigger (recommend) a Separation mechanism

- made Annex F & L consistent & non overlapping on triggers

- minor changes to short version (III.A.i.d & III.A.ii.d) for
consistency with annex F & L

- put the decisions of the IFR back to Consensus or super-majority. 

- removed IETF & RIRs from IFRT

- move trigger to trigger section in F

- changed duration  of  IFR to 9 months

- fixed table to refer to IFR

Made all the edits to the not-clean version.  Hope that was the right
thing to do.


Another note that was made to me in my constituency, will we have a
glossary of acronyms. 
We are very acronym rich.
thanks

avri


On 20-Apr-15 14:50, Marika Konings wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> Please find attached an updated draft which now incorporates, amongst
> others, a summary for section III, DT X, information from the legal
> memo, updates as a result of comments received and proposed text for
> section IIIB. Note that we’ve also reorganised the annexes to match
> the flow of the document.
>
> _Please note that that there a number of comments that have been
> flagged that need further consideration by the different DTs. We would
> like to encourage the leads of the DTs to pick up on the items that
> have been flagged for review and provide feedback on those items to
> the CWG mailing list as soon as possible._
>
> Also, note that we’ve incorporated those edits and/or comments that we
> considered corrections and/or clarifications of existing content as
> well as responses to some of the Sidley comments. If you do not agree
> with those responses or updates or are of the view that these are more
> than corrections and/or clarifications, please flag those accordingly. 
>
> You are encouraged to flag any items that you think warrant CWG
> consideration by Tuesday 20 April at 16.00 UTC at the latest. Other
> minor edits and/or clarifications can be submitted until Tuesday 20
> April 23.59 UTC.
>
> For your convenience I’ve attached a redline and clean version both in
> Word as well as pdf.
>
> Thanks again for all your feedback!
>
> Marika 
>
>
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