[CWG-Stewardship] Final Version for Publication (redline)

[Seun Ojedeji]

Great! Thanks for this. I think it would have been a good idea to have
included the roles of the PTI as I think its a critical entity in this
proposal.
That said, I hope the PC template would ask for suggestions from the
community on the role and composition of PTI

Thanks to everyone that made this happen.

Regards

sent from Google nexus 4
kindly excuse brevity and typos.
On 23 Apr 2015 00:52, "Grace Abuhamad" <grace.abuhamad at icann.org> wrote:

> *Sending this note on behalf of the Chairs — Grace*
>
>
> Dear All,
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>
> Attached is the final document (v3.5) to be published shortly as the
> CWG-Stewardship 2nd Draft Proposal.
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> Changes to the document include edits and suggestions that were sent to
> the mailing list following circulation of the document after yesterday’s
> call (v3.4). In addition, in the interest of time, the Chairs had to make a
> few editorial decisions as listed below in order of appearance:
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>    - We have synchronised the Section III introductory text with the text
>    we included in our Foreword/Executive Summary.
>    - We have removed the paragraph on the possible PTI Board roles, since
>    (a) this text was suggested by Sidley Austin to be optional and (b) it is
>    dependent on the legal structure of PTI which we have not yet finalised
>    (and therefore did not want to pre-empt in the Public Comment).
>    - We have included and edited version of the placeholder text offered
>    by Paul Kane regarding the progress in DT-A (SLE) work.
>    - We have edited Annex L on the Separation Review so as to reflect the
>    status of the discussions in the CWG-Stewardship and again, not to pre-empt
>    in the document for Public Comment.
>
>
> Staff will ensure the 2nd Draft Proposal will be published shortly. The
> ‘package’ of documents to be published will include:
>
>    1. A Foreword from the Chairs (which provides an executive summary of
>    the 2nd Draft Proposal)
>    2. The 2nd Draft Proposal (with annexes)
>    3. The 2nd Draft Proposal (without annexes)
>    4. The Public Comment template (to provide a preferred structure for
>    feedback)
>    5. An updated version of the XPlane Handout (which includes a
>    visualization of the proposed post-transition model)
>
>
> As noted by Staff, we have cancelled the CWG-Stewardship calls on Thursday
> 23 April and Tuesday 28 April. *We will pick up again on Thursday 30
> April at 11:00 UTC*.
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>
>
> Please encourage your communities to join the briefing webinars on Friday
> 24 April: https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-04-16-en. For
> RSVPs, please contact Brenda Brewer.
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>
> Thank-you to all of you and the ICANN staff who have contributed
> significant effort over a short space of time.
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> Best wishes,
>
> Jonathan and Lise
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