[CWG-Stewardship] Final Version for Publication (redline)

[Seun Ojedeji]

Hi Greg,

Yeah I meant the board, but logically speaking one would expect that the
role of PTI would also dictate/determine the role of it's board; A typical
organisation board ensures it's mission/purpose is carried out.

As per the template, I think you are right about that. Finger crossed then
on getting  specific direction from the community, even though it's not
included in our proposal.

Cheers!

sent from Google nexus 4
kindly excuse brevity and typos.
On 23 Apr 2015 07:27, "Greg Shatan" <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> wrote:

> Seun,
>
> I assume you are referring to the PTI Board and not to the PTI entity as a
> whole.  I think the role of the PTI entity is fairly clear.  As to the role
> and composition of the PTI Board, I don't believe there was sufficient
> convergence on anything that could be included, even in the alternative.
> Thus, I would say that it was a good idea *not* to include it.
>
> As for the public comment template, I saw no indication in our discussions
> that it was intended to contain any specific questions.  Rather, my
> understanding was that it was essentially a series of sections, following
> the subsections of the proposal, that could be filled in by the commenter.
> Having looked at the template, it appears consistent with that
> understanding.
>
> Greg
>
> Greg
>
> On Thu, Apr 23, 2015 at 2:07 AM, Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> Great! Thanks for this. I think it would have been a good idea to have
>> included the roles of the PTI as I think its a critical entity in this
>> proposal.
>> That said, I hope the PC template would ask for suggestions from the
>> community on the role and composition of PTI
>>
>> Thanks to everyone that made this happen.
>>
>> Regards
>>
>> sent from Google nexus 4
>> kindly excuse brevity and typos.
>> On 23 Apr 2015 00:52, "Grace Abuhamad" <grace.abuhamad at icann.org> wrote:
>>
>>> *Sending this note on behalf of the Chairs — Grace*
>>>
>>>
>>> Dear All,
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Attached is the final document (v3.5) to be published shortly as the
>>> CWG-Stewardship 2nd Draft Proposal.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Changes to the document include edits and suggestions that were sent to
>>> the mailing list following circulation of the document after yesterday’s
>>> call (v3.4). In addition, in the interest of time, the Chairs had to make a
>>> few editorial decisions as listed below in order of appearance:
>>>
>>>    - We have synchronised the Section III introductory text with the
>>>    text we included in our Foreword/Executive Summary.
>>>    - We have removed the paragraph on the possible PTI Board roles,
>>>    since (a) this text was suggested by Sidley Austin to be optional and (b)
>>>    it is dependent on the legal structure of PTI which we have not yet
>>>    finalised (and therefore did not want to pre-empt in the Public Comment).
>>>    - We have included and edited version of the placeholder text
>>>    offered by Paul Kane regarding the progress in DT-A (SLE) work.
>>>    - We have edited Annex L on the Separation Review so as to reflect
>>>    the status of the discussions in the CWG-Stewardship and again, not to
>>>    pre-empt in the document for Public Comment.
>>>
>>>
>>> Staff will ensure the 2nd Draft Proposal will be published shortly. The
>>> ‘package’ of documents to be published will include:
>>>
>>>    1. A Foreword from the Chairs (which provides an executive summary
>>>    of the 2nd Draft Proposal)
>>>    2. The 2nd Draft Proposal (with annexes)
>>>    3. The 2nd Draft Proposal (without annexes)
>>>    4. The Public Comment template (to provide a preferred structure for
>>>    feedback)
>>>    5. An updated version of the XPlane Handout (which includes a
>>>    visualization of the proposed post-transition model)
>>>
>>>
>>> As noted by Staff, we have cancelled the CWG-Stewardship calls on
>>> Thursday 23 April and Tuesday 28 April. *We will pick up again on
>>> Thursday 30 April at 11:00 UTC*.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Please encourage your communities to join the briefing webinars on
>>> Friday 24 April: https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-04-16-en.
>>> For RSVPs, please contact Brenda Brewer.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Thank-you to all of you and the ICANN staff who have contributed
>>> significant effort over a short space of time.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Best wishes,
>>>
>>> Jonathan and Lise
>>>
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