[CWG-Stewardship] Proposed Submission to FY16 Budget & Op Plan Public Comment

[Greg Shatan]

This looks good to me as well.  I would only note that in the second
numbered list, the semi-colon at the end of number 1 should be changed to a
period.

Greg

On Thu, Apr 30, 2015 at 6:50 AM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes at verisign.com> wrote:

>  This looks excellent to me Jonathan.  Very well done.
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> Chuck
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> *From:* cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [mailto:
> cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Jonathan Robinson
> *Sent:* Thursday, April 30, 2015 6:08 AM
> *To:* cwg-stewardship at icann.org
> *Subject:* [CWG-Stewardship] Proposed Submission to FY16 Budget & Op Plan
> Public Comment
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> All,
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> Please see below for proposed submission to the FY16 Budget & Operating
> Plan Public Comment
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> On behalf of the CWG-Stewardship, we would like to submit the attached
> recommendations, specifically with regard to the costs for IANA operations.
>
> The CWG-Stewardship is developing a proposal on the IANA Stewardship
> Transition, focussed on the names related functions. As part of the CWG’s
> recommendations for future IANA operations, the CWG-Stewardship tasked a
> subgroup (design team) to specifically look into budget-related
> recommendations. This subgroup worked with ICANN CFO Xavier Calvez to
> develop our recommendations. We would like to thank Xavier and his team for
> working with the CWG-Stewardship on this topic.
>
> The CWG recommendations are still in the process of being reviewed
> (including through the public comment process relating to the CWG draft
> proposal) but, because of the timing, the CWG believes that the draft
> recommendations should be submitted to the record of the public comments
> relating to FY16.
>
> The recommendations are provided in the attached document. For further
> drafts and background information on the CWG-Stewardship’s work on this
> topic, please see https://community.icann.org/x/2RwnAw.
>
> Yours sincerely,
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> Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson
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> Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship
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> --
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> Thanks,
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> Jonathan & Lise
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> *From:* Grace Abuhamad [mailto:grace.abuhamad at icann.org
> <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>]
> *Sent:* 29 April 2015 16:28
> *To:* Lise Fuhr; 'Jonathan Robinson'
> *Subject:* Re: SV: Submission to FY16 Budget & Op Plan Public Comment
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> Hi Chairs,
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> Here attached is the revised document (I removed the FY15 breakdown and
> added a footnote to reference its location on the Wiki, per Chuck’s
> suggestion). Below is the text I had originally drafted, with Lise’s text
> included. Will you send to CWG list or would you like me to do so?
>
>
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> On behalf of the CWG-Stewardship, we would like to submit the attached
> recommendations with regard to costs for IANA operations. The
> CWG-Stewardship is developing a proposal for the names portion on the IANA
> Stewardship Transition. As part of it recommendations for future IANA
> operations, the CWG-Stewardship tasked a subgroup to specifically look into
> budget-related recommendations. This subgroup worked with ICANN CFO Xavier
> Calvez to develop these recommendations. We would like to thank Xavier and
> his team for working with the CWG-Stewardship on this topic. The
> recommendations are still in process of the public comments of the CWG
> draft proposal, but because of the timing the CWG found that they should be
> submitted to the public comments for FY16.
>
>
>
> The recommendations are provided in the attached document. For further
> drafts and background information on the CWG-Stewardship’s work on this
> topic, please see https://community.icann.org/x/2RwnAw.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson
>
> Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship
>
>
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Grace
>
>
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> *From: *Lise Fuhr <lise.fuhr at difo.dk>
> *Date: *Tuesday, April 28, 2015 at 2:19 PM
> *To: *Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>, Jonathan Robinson <
> jrobinson at afilias.info>
> *Subject: *SV: Submission to FY16 Budget & Op Plan Public Comment
>
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> Hi both,
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> I think we should submit this – but is it clear enough in the
> recommendation that we need further detail than provided by Xavier? Should
> we include that this is also a part of the CCWG work/dependencies?
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> I have the following to the text:
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>
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> On behalf of the CWG-Stewardship, we would like to submit the attached
> recommendations with regard to costs for IANA operations. The
> CWG-Stewardship is developing a proposal for the names portion on the IANA
> Stewardship Transition. As part of it recommendations for future IANA
> operations, the CWG-Stewardship tasked a subgroup to specifically look into
> budget-related recommendations. This subgroup worked with ICANN CFO Xavier
> Calvez to develop these recommendations. We would like to thank Xavier and
> his team for working with the CWG-Stewardship on this topic. The
> recommendations are still in process of the public comments of the CWG
> draft proposal, but because of the timing the CWG found that they should be
> submitted to the public comments for FY16.
>
>
>
> The recommendations are provided in the attached document. For further
> drafts and background information on the CWG-Stewardship’s work on this
> topic, please see https://community.icann.org/x/2RwnAw.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson
>
> Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship
>
>
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Lise
>
>
>
> *Fra:* Grace Abuhamad [mailto:grace.abuhamad at icann.org
> <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>]
> *Sendt:* 28. april 2015 20:02
> *Til:* Lise Fuhr; Jonathan Robinson
> *Emne:* Submission to FY16 Budget & Op Plan Public Comment
> *Prioritet:* Høj
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> Hi Lise and Jonathan,
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> I am going through my “to-do” list for the CWG and realized that we have
> not yet submitted the DT-O (Budget) comments to the FY16 Budget & Op Plan
> Public Comment. This public comment closes on may 1st, so if you would
> still like to submit, we need to do this by the end of the week (preferably
> before Thursday’s call). Here’s some suggested text and the attachment
> excerpted from the CWG 2nd Draft Proposal.
>
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>  On behalf of the CWG-Stewardship, we would like to submit the attached
> recommendations with regard to costs for IANA operations. The
> CWG-Stewardship is developing a proposal for the names portion on the IANA
> Stewardship Transition. As part of it recommendations for future IANA
> operations, the CWG-Stewardship tasked a subgroup to specifically look into
> budget-related recommendations. This subgroup worked with ICANN CFO Xavier
> Calvez to develop these recommendations. We would like to thank Xavier and
> his team for working with the CWG-Stewardship on this topic.
>
>
>
> The recommendations are provided in the attached document. For further
> drafts and background information on the CWG-Stewardship’s work on this
> topic, please see https://community.icann.org/x/2RwnAw.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Lise Fuhr and Jonathan Robinson
>
> Co-chairs of the CWG-Stewardship
>
>
>
>  Please let me know how you would like to proceed, and whether you would
> like for me to submit this on your behalf.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Grace
>
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