[CWG-Stewardship] Comments to Final Draft

[Greg Shatan]

I went back through and just deleted the subsections, so now there are a
bunch of references to Section 3.A.  In an ideal world we could
cross-reference to paragraph numbers, but I'm not sure that's worth the
time.

My changes are in track changes.

Greg

On Wed, Jun 10, 2015 at 8:11 PM, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org>
wrote:

> Thanks Greg. I just saw your note about section numbering. We lightened up
> on the section numbering when we introduced paragraph numbering into the
> draft. I can check/cross reference the term sheet to the final if this is
> still an issue (I haven't looked at your draft yet).
>
> Sent from my mobile device
>
> > On Jun 10, 2015, at 20:09, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > All:
> >
> > I've made a few changes to the Term Sheet section, including shortening
> the section on trademarks and putting it in brackets to further signify
> that it's an open point.  Also made some formatting changes (including
> having the headers on every page).
> >
> > Greg
> > <FinalTransitionProposal_v6 - Redline - FINAL (JR GS Review).docx>
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