[CWG-Stewardship] For your review: updated public comment review tool

[Marika Konings]

Dear All,

Please find attached for your review the updated public comment review tool which now also includes those comments that were received after the deadline. For the record, 53 submissions have been received in total.

As the comments from Chuck were received after staff had started work on the updated version, you'll find included a compare versions document that will highlight the comments included by Chuck on the 22 May version as well as the comments that were added in this updated version.

Best regards,

Marika

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad at icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad at icann.org>>
Date: Friday 22 May 2015 20:34
To: "cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship at icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship at icann.org>>
Cc: Brenda Brewer <brenda.brewer at icann.org<mailto:brenda.brewer at icann.org>>
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] For your review: public comment summary and review tool

Dear all,

Staff has compiled a summary overview of the pubic comment submissions and filled out a public comment review tool, noting responses and specific action items for the CWG-Stewardship to consider. Please review these documents and suggest edits based on your assessment of the public comment submissions. The proposed actions for the CWG-Stewardship are highlighted in blue in the response column (far right).

The Public Comment Review Tool is very long and may be difficult to read. This is due to staff's approach in thorough and detailed review. We will provide a more digestible, action-focused, version of this tool for Tuesday's meeting. We are providing the long version to you today to demonstrate our work progress and preparation for next week's high-intensity meetings.

While the Public Comment Review Tool is very detailed, the summary overview is presented in a presentation format and focuses more on the "bigger picture". Depending on your review-style, you may be inclined to start with one or the other document.

Also, please note that these documents incorporate all (44) submissions received up until the deadline on 20 May at 23:59 UTC. As of 22 May at 16:00 UTC, there are (7) late submissions. These submissions have not yet been incorporated in this document but will be added in time for the high-intensity meetings (along with the submissions received based on the extension for those who are reliant on translations).

As a reminder, Brenda kindly pulled all the submissions together on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/o5A0Aw. You can download all the files at once (like a zip file) by clicking on the "download all" button at the bottom left side of the macro.

Have a good (submission-reading-filled) weekend,
Grace
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