[CWG-Stewardship] Fwd: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016

Sun Aug 7 15:37:33 UTC 2016

Dear Andrew,
Tks again for your kind reply.
Please send me a red mark  Word Version and I Will reply today.
I HAVE SOME CONCERS ON SOME OF THE  CHANGED MADE  BY GREC
Regards
Kavouss

2016-08-07 17:28 GMT+02:00 Andrew Sullivan <ajs at anvilwalrusden.com>:

> I don't know whetheer you will get that before tomorrow, and that is
> really rather late.  Can you at least say what your concerns are?
> There really isn't a lot of time: this needs to go to public comment
> on Thursday.  An additional day to wait for the comments would be bad.
>
> Best regards,
>
> A
>
> On Sun, Aug 07, 2016 at 05:14:50PM +0200, Kavouss Arasteh wrote:
> > Seun,
> > I know that a word version was included but the Word Version is a clean
> > Text and it is difficult to identify the changes .I wish to see what was
> > the changes introduced by Greg
> > I still need the red mark text in WORD VERSION.
> > Regards
> > Kavouss
> >
> > 2016-08-07 14:09 GMT+02:00 Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji at gmail.com>:
> >
> > > A word version was included in Greg's mail
> > >
> > > Regards
> > >
> > > Sent from my LG G4
> > > Kindly excuse brevity and typos
> > >
> > > On 7 Aug 2016 10:36 a.m., "Kavouss Arasteh" <kavouss.arasteh at gmail.com
> >
> > > wrote:
> > >
> > >> Grec,
> > >> Thank you very much for the amendments. I do not agree with some of
> them
> > >> In order to enable me to provide my counter comments to you, pls
> provide
> > >> a word version of your amendment as soon as convinient
> > >> Regards
> > >> Kavouss
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> 2016-08-07 0:22 GMT+02:00 Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc at gmail.com>:
> > >>
> > >>> CWG,
> > >>>
> > >>> I am forwarding a revised draft of the proposed Community Agreement
> > >>> relating to the IANA IPR.  In addition to any other comments you may
> have,
> > >>> I draw your attention to the two specific items in the email below:
> (1)
> > >>> identifying an entity to sign for the names community, and (2)
> providing a
> > >>> brief description of the IANA Services used by the names community (
> > >>> *see* Exhibit A for descriptions provided by the other communities).
> > >>>
> > >>> This will be the subject of further refinement by the IPR
> collaborative
> > >>> group early in the week, with the goal of initiating a public comment
> > >>> period as soon as possible after the CWG-IANA meeting on Thursday.
> > >>>
> > >>> Greg
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> > >>> From: Hofheimer, Joshua T. <jhofheimer at sidley.com>
> > >>> Date: Sat, Aug 6, 2016 at 4:55 PM
> > >>> Subject: [client com] FW: Revised Community Agreement Draft:
> 08-05-2016
> > >>> To: Client <cwg-client at icann.org>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Dear Client Committee,
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Attached please find a revised draft of the proposed Community
> Agreement
> > >>> for your review and comment.  This is an iterative version prepared
> jointly
> > >>> by counsel (Sidley) to the CWG and counsel to the IETF Trust to
> reflect the
> > >>> 7-point discussion items.  To be clear, it is still a work in
> progress, but
> > >>> we believe ready for the CWG to have an opportunity for review.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Two important issues to highlight:
> > >>>
> > >>> 1) the Names Community needs to determine who will be the signatory
> > >>> party, acting on behalf of the Names Community, to the Community
> > >>> Agreement.  For your information, the attached draft has the
> organizations
> > >>> put forward to represent the Numbers and Protocols Communities; and
> > >>>
> > >>> 2) we need a brief description of the IANA services to be provided on
> > >>> behalf of the Names Community.  The following high-level description
> was
> > >>> included in a draft of the Naming Functions Agreement.  If this is
> > >>> acceptable for including here is well, please advise (or we ask the
> Client
> > >>> Committee to provide a sufficient description):
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> The “*IANA Naming Function*” is comprised of:
> > >>>
> > >>> (a)             Management of the DNS Root Zone (“*Root Zone
> Management*
> > >>> ”);
> > >>>
> > >>> (b)             Management of the .INT top-level domain;
> > >>>
> > >>> (c)              Maintenance of a repository of internationalized
> > >>> domain name tables and label generation rule sets; and
> > >>>
> > >>> (d)             Provision of other services related to the management
> > >>> of .INT top-level domains, at ICANN’s reasonable request and at
> ICANN’s
> > >>> expense.
> > >>>
> > >>> Please provide any comment or feedback as soon as practical, as we
> are
> > >>> trying to finalize the draft for approval by the various
> stakeholders and
> > >>> release for public comment by Thursday.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Thank you in advance.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Cheers,
> > >>>
> > >>> Josh
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> *Joshua Hofheimer*
> > >>>
> > >>> *Sidley Austin LLP*
> > >>>
> > >>> *jhofheimer at sidley.com <jhofheimer at sidley.com>*
> > >>>
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> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> *From:* iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net [mailto:iana-ipr-bounces at nro.net]
> *On
> > >>> Behalf Of *Jorge Contreras
> > >>> *Sent:* Friday, August 05, 2016 10:01 AM
> > >>> *To:* iana-ipr at nro.net
> > >>> *Subject:* [Iana-ipr] Revised Community Agreement Draft: 08-05-2016
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> All – attached is a draft of the Community Agreement that Josh and I
> > >>> have collaborated on over the past two days.  We believe that it
> reflects
> > >>> the current requirements of the parties, and submit it for your
> review and
> > >>> discussion.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> A clean version, as well as a marked version against the draft of
> > >>> 07-30-16 (in PDF format) are attached.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Please note a few items that still need to be completed, including
> the
> > >>> description of the IANA Names Service, the identities of the CCG
> > >>> representatives, etc.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Best regards,
> > >>>
> > >>> Jorge
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Jorge L. Contreras
> > >>>
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