[CWG-Stewardship] Sidley's Draft CWG Comment Letter on CCWG Final Proposal for review

Gomes, Chuck cgomes at verisign.com
Sat Feb 20 14:12:22 UTC 2016


Overall, this looks pretty good to me but I have a few comments for consideration about the letter:

·         1.b says: “The ability to exercise oversight with respect to key ICANN Board decisions (including with respect to the ICANN Board’s oversight of the IANA Functions) by reviewing and approving:  (i) ICANN Board decisions with respect to recommendations resulting from an IANA Function Review (“IFR”) or Special IFR and (ii) the ICANN Budget;”  Because the CWG Stewardship’s focus is specifically on the IANA budget, would it make sense to change (ii) to something like this: “the ICANN Budget including a separate budge for IANA services”?  It seems to me that this would be consistent with item 2.

·         I like the fact that the letter states the CWG requirements for each area and that a clear conclusion is provided but I think it would also be very helpful if in each of the eight cases, between the CWG requirement paragraph and the conclusion, the CCWG Accountability recommendations that fulfill the requirements were briefly listed.  If this seems like a good idea, here is a formatting idea: Provide a heading for each of the three paragraphs of each of the eight items just like is already done for the conclusions: 1) CWG Stewardship Requirements; 2) Applicable CCWG Accountability Recommendations; 3) Conclusion.

Chuck



From: cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Lise Fuhr
Sent: Saturday, February 20, 2016 4:03 AM
To: cwg-stewardship at icann.org
Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Sidley's Draft CWG Comment Letter on CCWG Final Proposal for review

Dear All,

Last Friday the 12th February we sent you an update on process and timing regarding our work on the CWG Stewardship Dependency on CCWG Accountability.

Sidley has, as the CWG agreed, updated our response to CCWG to reflect the changes that have since been made in the Supplementary Proposal. Below is the email from Sidley which also addresses areas that the CWG should be aware of.

We now need you to review this response and give any feedback immediately and no later than 23h59 UTC on Tuesday 23 February.

We will then ensure that the final response is communicated to the CCWG, the Chartering Organisations and, of course, the ICG on or around 24 February.

Any concerns, questions or issues arising, please let us know ASAP.

Jonathan & Lise
CWG Stewardship Co-Chairs


From: cwg-client-bounces at icann.org<mailto:cwg-client-bounces at icann.org> [mailto:cwg-client-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Flanagan, Sharon
Sent: 19 February 2016 22:57
To: Client Committee
Subject: [client com] Draft CWG Comment Letter on CCWG Final Proposal

Dear All,

Attached please find a draft of the CWG letter to the CCWG regarding the CCWG Supplemental Final Proposal.

As noted in our prior email, with respect to the CWG dependency for an empowered community there was a request in the prior CWG comment letter for CCWG to consider whether the timelines in the prior CCWG proposal for SO/AC action were sufficiently long.  The revised CCWG proposal has extended some of these timelines.  As noted in our prior email, while this is not strictly an issue of conformity with the CWG proposal as the CWG proposal does not address this type of detail, we wanted to confirm that CWG was satisfied with the response to its prior comment letter.

Please also note that the community power to recall the entire ICANN Board is modified when the Board is to be recalled for implementing GAC advice.  Specifically, if the Empowered Community initiates an IRP challenging the Board’s implementation of GAC advice as being inconsistent with the ICANN Bylaws but does not prevail in the IRP, the Empowered Community may not exercise its power to recall the entire Board solely on the basis of the matter decided by the IRP. The Empowered Community may, however, exercise the power to recall the entire Board based on other grounds.  We don’t believe this directly impacts the CWG dependency, but we did want to note it.

Please let us know if you have any questions or would like to discuss.

Kind regards,
Holly and Sharon

SHARON R. FLANAGAN
Partner

SIDLEY AUSTIN LLP
www.sidley.com<http://www.sidley.com>
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