<div dir="ltr">Hi Allan,<div><br></div><div>This is excellent work and extremely helpful. I haven't gone through it in detail yet but I have a slight query to begin with.</div><div><br></div><div>In the triage, what is the suggested criteria/heuristic for checking a clause as "Linked to Accountability & Oversight"?</div><div><br></div><div>For example, why would "Audit Requirements" in C.5 not satisfy the criteria?</div><div><br></div><div>Or say something completely administrative, like "C.2.9.2: Perform Administrative Functions Associated With Root Zone Management". Why would this not be linked to NTIA oversight? </div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div>Guru</div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sat, Oct 25, 2014 at 2:58 AM, James Gannon <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net" target="_blank">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<div>Im still looking to assist with this, Ill look over your draft over the weekend.</div>
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<div>Thanks for kicking this off.</div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">Please find attached an initial draft of the triage of the IANA functions contract as discussed on the CWG call this week. <u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">The first document is the draft Triage itself, organized as per our meeting this week. In the second I have pasted the provisions that I have brought together all of
the provisions that I categorized as “Likely Needs Improving” and “Linked to Accountability and Oversight”. I know that a number of you, including Chuck Gomes, Kris Seeburn, Greg Shatan, James Gannon, Guru Acharya, Mary Uduma, Wanawit Ahkuputra, and Pitinan
Kooarmornpatana have all volunteered to work on this. Thank you. I have sent the drafts to the full list as I do not have all of your emails. Could I ask that anyone who has already volunteered, or anyone that wishes to do so now, to respond quickly to
this email so that we might start a CWG RFP2C list. <u></u><u></u></span></div>
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<span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">I invite you to review the current draft documents. I am hoping that this can be done in the documents themselves. But if the comments and changes become too cumbersome,
I will ask Bart or Marika to suggest how we can deal with these. In closing let me make a general comment. I see the objective of this exercise as being to<span> </span><u>identify</u><span> </span>potential
issues that will need to be addressed at some point. I do not, however, see<span> </span><u>the resolution</u><span> </span>of these issues as being part of this SWG’s work. Rather I see its objective
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