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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks Lise and Martin. Here is my feedback on the ‘</span><b>Draft of Principles and Criteria that Should Underpin Decisions on the Transition of NTIA Stewardship</b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">’.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Principle b.v says: “</span><u>Performance against service level commitments and against the agreed policy base</u>. This should be monitored and there should
be a mechanism to ensure that failures are corrected;<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">” The second sentence seems to me to be an ongoing action item once the service is implemented rather than a criterion for
evaluating service options. I think the first part could be worded into a principle but it needs some work. Not being totally sure what was intended, I will leave it to Lise and/or Martin to edit it if my comment makes sense.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Lise Fuhr<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 29, 2014 3:54 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] Draft of Principles<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Dear All,</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">As per the request from last week's call we have produced a list of the principles from the Charter
of the CWG and the ICG (attached).</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Also as discussed last week Martin Boyle and I have been elaborating a set of principles and/or the
criteria against which we would review the proposals the CWG will be developing, in order to ensure that the proposal takes into account the different aspects that need to be covered.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">The draft of those principles and/or criteria are also attached to this email for your consideration.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Given this is not directly in line with the work required to develop proposals I am suggesting that
these should only be discussed on the mailing list for time being.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">We will allocate time at the Face to Face meeting in Germany for us to consider the latest version of
these as they will have evolved from discussions on the list.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Best regards,</span><span lang="EN-GB"><br>
</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Lise</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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