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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Thanks for the feedback Milton.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Milton L Mueller [mailto:mueller@syr.edu]
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<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, November 16, 2014 7:58 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> kurt@kjpritz.com; Gomes, Chuck; cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I looked at Kurt’s proposed edits and suggestions and many of them make sense. There were two, however, that I do not think we want to make. First, including
survey results regarding the current performance of the IANA is not relevant to a description of the accountability mechanisms that exist today. Second, in the table labeled “</span><b>How is the IANA functions operator held accountable?”</b>
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I favor the existing language over Kurt’s proposed “case by case decision” language.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com">kurt@kjpritz.com</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, November 14, 2014 3:57 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck; <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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is not clear, please contact me. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal<br>
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Date: Fri, November 14, 2014 11:15 am<br>
To: "<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><span style="color:windowtext">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a>" <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><span style="color:windowtext">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a>><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:black"> Greg Shatan [<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com"><span style="color:blue">mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com</span></a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, November 14, 2014 12:26 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org"><span style="color:blue">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: CWG RFP2B Proposal</span><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">I have attached a revised version RFP2B. Primarily, I took certain sections of the text (primarily those involving lists) and converted those sections to tables. Due to quirks
in the interaction between tables and track changes, I did not make these changes in track changes. However, I think it will be fairly obvious where these changes are, especially since there were no tables in this document beforehand.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">One reason for this change is that, in preparing RFP3, we will need to consider how these existing aspects oversight and accountability will be dealt with in our transition proposal.
It will be easier to take these charts and add additional columns to show this. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">On Fri, Nov 14, 2014 at 11:35 AM, Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:blue">cgomes@verisign.com</span></a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:blue">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:blue">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</span></a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, November 11, 2014 8:19 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:blue">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</span></a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [CWG-Stewardship] CWG RFP2B Proposal<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High</span><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:black">Here is a draft of the ICG RFP Section 2B proposal for full CWG review and discussion. Please make any suggested edits using the Word redlining function and save the file with
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