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<div style="font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Thanks, Donna. I’ve updated the flow chart (see attached) in relation to your comments on pages 1, 2 and 4 which I believe are minor changes and in line what was discussed in Frankfurt (on page
4, I changed ‘prepare' to ‘post' as I think that aligns with the intent of your comment?). In relation to your comments on page 5, those sound like details that may be better suited for the actual written proposal and not necessarily the flow chart? I’ve posted
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<div style="font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Best regards,</div>
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<div style="font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Marika</div>
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<p style="margin: 0px;">Page 5 – Entering into Contract (Transition) - Comments from Donna Austin: </p>
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<li><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none;">Can we confirm that what we mean by commence the contracting process includes the development of a contract or agreement to replace the existing arrangement
between ICANN and NTIA. We should be explicit.</span></li><li><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none;">
<p style="margin: 0px;">I'd like to see a step in here that has the Review Team review the current contract IANA Functions contract as a starting point -- commencing community consultations seems unguided. </p>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Donna Austin <<a href="mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com">Donna.Austin@ariservices.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday 20 November 2014 17:37<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[CWG-Stewardship] Comments on IANA Transition Flow Chart<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I have a few comments on the IANA Transition Flow Chart that I’ve attached here for consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Tahoma, sans-serif;"> Donna Austin
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 20 November 2014 5:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Marika Konings (<a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org">marika.konings@icann.org</a>)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Bernard Turcotte (<a href="mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com">turcotte.bernard@gmail.com</a>); Bart Boswinkel (<a href="mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org">bart.boswinkel@icann.org</a>)<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">I’ve made some comments on the attached. Let me know if you can’t access the comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Thanks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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