<html><body><span style="font-family:Verdana; color:#000; font-size:10pt;"><div><span style="">Hi Martin:</span></div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">I see that you just replied to the group and am sorry I did not get my comment regarding item 4 to you in time. </div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">Without being an expert, I don't think my insertion would be much more than I originally proposed. I think once the thought is part of the document, others will improve on it.</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">"For gTLDs: the IANA function should continue to provide service notwithstanding any on-going, previous or anticipated contractual disputes between ICANN and the gTLD operator. No additional requirements for prompt delivery of IANA services should be imposed unless they are directly and demonstrably linked to global security, stability and resilience of the DNS.”</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">I am not sure we need the last bit about the security / stability reference but I think that both clauses should be similar in that regard. So if we amend one of the clauses, say for ccTLDs, we should examine the gTLD clause to see if a similar change is warranted and vice-versa.</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">Thanks for reaching out to me and considering my comment. Let me know if I can be of service.</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">Regards,</div><div style=""><br style=""></div><div style="">Kurt</div><div><br></div>
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Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Principles - revised version 10 December<br>
From: Martin Boyle <<a href="mailto:Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk">Martin.Boyle@nominet.org.uk</a>><br>
Date: Wed, December 10, 2014 9:55 am<br>
To: CWG Stewardship <<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a>><br>
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</style> <div class="WordSection1"> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">My apologies for the delay in circulating a new version of the principles text for our discussion tomorrow. As requested, I have tidied up the text. In doing so:<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->I have ignored comments more related to implementation and use of the principles. These are obviously important and need to be reflected through into the development of the proposal but are not in themselves principles.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->I have made minor and what appear to be mainly uncontroversial edits (including removing the two legacy footnotes!).<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->There was a comment about the need to do an analysis of capture mechanisms associated with c.iv. I have tried to add wording, although I am not sure that the addition is needed as again it is more an issue of implementation based on the principles, rather than a principle per se. I’d welcome thoughts.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->I have asked Kurt Pritz for proposed wording for gTLDs on contract requirements in g.ii.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">5.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->There are three outstanding major issues.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1"> <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->The text in f.ii and the policy authority text for ccTLDs: I have tried to correct the flow of the paragraph from the chapeau text. I have also highlighted the proposed addition to take care of GAC-members’ concerns about third-party involvement in decisions affecting ccTLDs. Otherwise the text is substantially as agreed in Frankfurt.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1"> <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">b.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->Two additions proposed by Avri – <a href="http://f.vi">f.vi</a> and i. – have been marked as deleted. Neither was supported and both had calls for deletion.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1"> <!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="mso-list:Ignore">c.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman""> </span></span><!--[endif]-->There have been calls for deletion of the final paragraph in section h and no support for retention. I have marked it as deleted.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">I hope that this helps us identify a way forward to complete this document.<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Thanks<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;">Martin Boyle<o:p></o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> <div class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:12pt;"><o:p> </o:p></div> </div> <hr>_______________________________________________<br>
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