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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Based on our analysis, there were a significant number of comments that said the proposal was too complex and paradoxically the were also a significant number
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Milton L Mueller [mailto:mueller@syr.edu]
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, 9 January 2015 12:40 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Kieren McCarthy; Donna Austin<br>
<b>Cc:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [CWG-Stewardship] RySG analysis of public comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I think the RySG did a good job of summarizing the comments from their point of view, but I can’t agree with one of their conclusions as to what
 should guide future efforts: the proposal is “too complex.” <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The statement that a proposal is “too complex” implies that one could develop a proposal that does the same things and has the same safeguards
 and is less complex. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">My response to that is: show me.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We have already seen ALAC try and completely fail to deliver an alternative solution that is less complex.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The “too complex” charge strikes me as one of those things that one would say after one’s first confrontation with the proposal. It was my first
 reaction, too. It is very easy to say, it is a kind of superficial response. The real issue is, however: what proposal is less complex, and how would it work? Until we have real, complete alternate proposals on the table the characterization of one proposal
 as “complex” is not very meaningful. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If you think the status quo is not complex, you don’t understand what goes on in the current regime. The NTIA is embedded in the US government
 in a highly complex way; nothing simple about it. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org">mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kieren McCarthy<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, January 8, 2015 11:44 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Donna Austin<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org">cwg-stewardship@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] RySG analysis of public comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">For what it's worth, I think this is a useful and succinct summary.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">I'm not entirely sure why the ALAC proposal has been highlighted twice when no other submissions have been specifically mentioned and there were other proposals. But apart from that this seems like a good path forward
 to me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Kieren<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span lang="EN-US">On Thu, Jan 8, 2015 at 6:15 PM, Donna Austin &lt;<a href="mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com" target="_blank">Donna.Austin@ariservices.com</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">In the interests of sharing, a group of RySG members conducted our own analysis of the comments submitted on the CWG Transition Proposal. Provided below
 are our conclusions and recommendations for next steps. Also attached is a document we prepared containing key excerpts of comments as they relate to various aspects of the proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Please accept this information in the spirit that it is offered—not as authoritative but as the result of an analysis developed by the RySG for our own
 purposes. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">We (Chuck, Stephanie, Sarah and myself) will be happy to answer any questions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>RySG IANA CWG Team Conclusions regarding ongoing work of the IANA CWG</b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">The RySG believes that the following statements have very strong support in the community and hence can be used to guide future decisions by the CWG:<o:p></o:p></p>
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A.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>The current service of the IANA functions operator is satisfactory and ICANN should initially continue as the operator when the transition occurs.<o:p></o:p></p>
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B.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>The IANA CWG proposal as described in the request for public comments is too complex and does not contain enough detail.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Of the four elements of the proposed IANA CWG proposal, there appears to be reasonable support for the CSC, MRT and IAP in some form, although not necessarily as described in the
 CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">The RySG believes that the following statements need further investigation and/or indicate areas where additional work is warranted:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>i.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span>The overall structure of the CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>ii.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span>Contract Co.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>iii.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span>Internal to ICANN option<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b>RySG IANA CWG Team Recommendations regarding Next Steps</b><o:p></o:p></p>
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1.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>Suggestions made by commenters should be evaluated based on the following criteria to identify which ones should be excluded, which ones should definitely be considered further and which ones need
 further investigation:<o:p></o:p></p>
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a.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>CWG principles<o:p></o:p></p>
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b.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>Would they contribute toward a simpler proposal?<o:p></o:p></p>
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c.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>Results of the two surveys.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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2.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>All alternatives to the CWG proposal should be examined in detail, not just the one proposed by the ALAC, to identify what alternatives or elements of the alternatives should be investigated further.<o:p></o:p></p>
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3.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>An extension of the targeted time frame of at least 60 days should be requested from the ICG to allow for continued work and an additional public comment period after reasonable consensus is reached
 on a proposal for submission to the chartering SOs and ACs.<o:p></o:p></p>
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4.<span style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>The work of the IANA CWG and Accountability CCWG are properly dependent. The IANA CWG should have the opportunity to revisit the CWG Proposal, ALAC alternative, and other options once the outputs
 of Workstream 1 of the Accountability CCWG are provided and consider the implications for accountability as it relates to the performance of the IANA Functions.
<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Gomes,
 Chuck [<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">mailto:cgomes@verisign.com</a>] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 8 January 2015 4:25 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Donna Austin; Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; <a href="mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com">
rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Thanks to all three of you for the good edits. The first attachment is a redline that includes a couple edits I made to the second paragraph
 and a comment I added on page 3 regarding the fact that the last two sections will be sent to the CWG list. Please let me know if you see any problems.&nbsp; I also attached a clean copy.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">The third document attached is a final version of our excerpts.&nbsp; Note I added an introduction.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Donna – As our official rep, I think it would be good if you sent the documents as follows:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-18.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D">·</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">To the RySG &amp; NTAG lists:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">o</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Clean version of the analysis<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">o</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Excerpts document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">To the CWG list:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">o</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">The last two paragraphs of the analysis.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:72.0pt;text-indent:-18.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;;color:#1F497D">o</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:7.0pt;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">The excerpts document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Can you do that?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-US" style="color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 Austin [<a href="mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com">mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, January 08, 2015 4:24 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck; Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; <a href="mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com">
rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">I added the ‘internal to ICANN option’ as worthy of further consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 8 January 2015 11:58 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; <a href="mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com">
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, January 08, 2015 2:15 PM<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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