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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I think the RySG did a good job of summarizing the comments from their point of view, but I can’t agree with one of their conclusions as to what should guide
 future efforts: the proposal is “too complex.” <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">The statement that a proposal is “too complex” implies that one could develop a proposal that does the same things and has the same safeguards and is less complex.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">My response to that is: show me.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">We have already seen ALAC try and completely fail to deliver an alternative solution that is less complex.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">The “too complex” charge strikes me as one of those things that one would say after one’s first confrontation with the proposal. It was my first reaction, too.
 It is very easy to say, it is a kind of superficial response. The real issue is, however: what proposal is less complex, and how would it work? Until we have real, complete alternate proposals on the table the characterization of one proposal as “complex”
 is not very meaningful. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;color:#1F497D">If you think the status quo is not complex, you don’t understand what goes on in the current regime. The NTIA is embedded in the US government in a highly complex
 way; nothing simple about it. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kieren McCarthy<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, January 8, 2015 11:44 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Donna Austin<br>
<b>Cc:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] RySG analysis of public comments<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">For what it's worth, I think this is a useful and succinct summary.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I'm not entirely sure why the ALAC proposal has been highlighted twice when no other submissions have been specifically mentioned and there were other proposals. But apart from that this seems like a good path forward to me.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kieren<o:p></o:p></p>
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[sent through phone]<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p>On Thu, Jan 8, 2015 at 6:15 PM, Donna Austin &lt;<a href="mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com" target="_blank">Donna.Austin@ariservices.com</a>&gt; wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">All<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">In the interests of sharing, a group of RySG members conducted our own analysis of the comments submitted on the CWG Transition Proposal.
 Provided below are our conclusions and recommendations for next steps. Also attached is a document we prepared containing key excerpts of comments as they relate to various aspects of the proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">Please accept this information in the spirit that it is offered—not as authoritative but as the result of an analysis developed by the RySG
 for our own purposes. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">We (Chuck, Stephanie, Sarah and myself) will be happy to answer any questions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span lang="EN-AU">RySG IANA CWG Team Conclusions regarding ongoing work of the IANA CWG</span></b><span lang="EN-AU"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU">The RySG believes that the following statements have very strong support in the community and hence can be used to guide future decisions by the CWG:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">A.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">The current service of the IANA functions operator is satisfactory and ICANN should initially continue as the operator when the transition occurs.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">B.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">The IANA CWG proposal as described in the request for public comments is too complex and does not contain enough detail.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU">Of the four elements of the proposed IANA CWG proposal, there appears to be reasonable support for the CSC, MRT and IAP in some form, although not necessarily
 as described in the CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU">The RySG believes that the following statements need further investigation and/or indicate areas where additional work is warranted:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span lang="EN-AU">i.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">The overall structure of the CWG proposal.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span lang="EN-AU">ii.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">Contract Co.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span lang="EN-AU">iii.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">Internal to ICANN option<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><b><span lang="EN-AU">RySG IANA CWG Team Recommendations regarding Next Steps</span></b><span lang="EN-AU"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">1.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">Suggestions made by commenters should be evaluated based on the following criteria to identify which ones should be excluded, which ones should definitely be considered further and which ones need further investigation:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">a.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">CWG principles<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">b.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">Would they contribute toward a simpler proposal?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">c.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">Results of the two surveys.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-AU">&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">2.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">All alternatives to the CWG proposal should be examined in detail, not just the one proposed by the ALAC, to identify what alternatives or elements of the alternatives should be investigated further.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">3.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">An extension of the targeted time frame of at least 60 days should be requested from the ICG to allow for continued work and an additional public comment period after reasonable consensus is reached on a proposal for submission to
 the chartering SOs and ACs.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-AU">4.</span><span lang="EN-AU" style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:115%">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span lang="EN-AU">The work of the IANA CWG and Accountability CCWG are properly dependent. The IANA CWG should have the opportunity to revisit the CWG Proposal, ALAC alternative, and other options once the outputs of Workstream 1 of the Accountability
 CCWG are provided and consider the implications for accountability as it relates to the performance of the IANA Functions.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">Donna<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks to all three of you for the good edits. The first attachment is a redline that includes a couple edits I made to the second paragraph and a comment
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">The third document attached is a final version of our excerpts.&nbsp; Note I added an introduction.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Donna – As our official rep, I think it would be good if you sent the documents as follows:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D">To the RySG &amp; NTAG lists:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D">Excerpts document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D">To the CWG list:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D">The last two paragraphs of the analysis.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D">The excerpts document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Can you do that?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span lang="EN-AU" style="color:#1F497D">I added the ‘internal to ICANN option’ as worthy of further consideration.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Gomes, Chuck<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, 8 January 2015 11:58 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; <a href="mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com">
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<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks to both of you.&nbsp; I will hold off a couple hours before finalizing and distributing.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, January 08, 2015 2:15 PM<br>
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rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><a name="OLE_LINK2"></a><a name="OLE_LINK1"></a>Thanks Stacy. Took a stab at tweaking/shortening a bit. I changed the recommendation slightly to provide the opportunity to actually
 revisit the proposals once WS 1 outputs are published. Please advise if this is not what we want. Also added revisiting other alternatives.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">Okay….fairly wordy and it needs your edits, but here is my suggestion for basic language.<o:p></o:p></p>
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