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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I suggested several edits that I think are very minor. I added a comment asking what question 3 means in the list of key elements: “</span><span style="color:black">How
to maintain documentation of ICANN’s obligations as the IANA Functions Operator?</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Another question I have is whether it is realistic to expect that one legal expert would have all the expertise that will be needed. I think we definitely
need legal expertise regarding CA non-profit law. But we also need international legal expertise, trust expertise, etc. To deal with this I suggested a couple minor edits that avoided making it look like we are looking for one expert. Obviously, if we can
find one expert that is independent and has all the expertise needed, that would be great, but that may not be possible.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Seun Ojedeji<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, January 19, 2015 5:10 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Greg Shatan<br>
<b>Cc:</b> cwg-stewardship@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] Revised Draft Legal Scoping Document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Made a few edit on the draft...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Mon, Jan 19, 2015 at 9:26 AM, Greg Shatan <<a href="mailto:gregshatanipc@gmail.com" target="_blank">gregshatanipc@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">This document has now been extensively revised. Most earlier "suggestions" have been "accepted into the document. A few have been left open for further consideration. There are also a number of new changes
and additions. Please review as soon as possible, as i would like to put this document largely to rest by 20:00 UTC Tuesday.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Here is the link. Please make sure to make your changes in "suggesting" or "comments" mode, not "editing" mode. Thanks!<br>
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<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/14CfnVwo4d3tIGyuFB2fyxqF0ycQ6uxo0rjlvtqhDyTU/edit?usp=sharing" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/document/d/14CfnVwo4d3tIGyuFB2fyxqF0ycQ6uxo0rjlvtqhDyTU/edit?usp=sharing<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thanks!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#888888">Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#006600">Seun Ojedeji,<br>
Federal University Oye-Ekiti<br>
web: </span></i><i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#888888"><a href="http://www.fuoye.edu.ng" target="_blank">http://www.fuoye.edu.ng</a><br>
</span></i><i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#006600">Mobile: +2348035233535</span></i><i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#888888"><br>
</span></i><i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#006600">alt email:<a href="http://goog_1872880453" target="_blank">
</a><a href="mailto:seun.ojedeji@fuoye.edu.ng" target="_blank">seun.ojedeji@fuoye.edu.ng</a></span></i><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#888888"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Garamond","serif";color:#888888">The key to understanding is humility - my view !<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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