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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:106%;color:#1F497D">+1 I think a second look at the neutrality of the phrasing needs to be considered, the CWG is not ruling any option in or out at this point and the statement needs to reflect
that and no show any bias in either direction until that route has been decided by the consensus of the CWG.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:windowtext"> cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Matthew Shears<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, February 02, 2015 3:06 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck; Milton L Mueller; jrobinson@afilias.info; cwg-stewardship@icann.org; Lise Fuhr<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [CWG-Stewardship] CWG - Draft Report for Singapore<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-CA">+ 1 Chuck and echoing many of Milton's concerns.<br>
<br>
Some of the wording in the introductory section also gave me pause. For example:
</span><i><span lang="EN-CA">with a section added on an “Internal-to-ICANN” solution
<a style="mso-comment-reference:CS_1;mso-comment-date:20150202T0934">as a replacement f</a></span></i><span class="MsoCommentReference"><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-size:8.0pt"><![if !supportAnnotations]><a class="msocomanchor" id="_anchor_1" onmouseover="msoCommentShow('_anchor_1','_com_1')" onmouseout="msoCommentHide('_com_1')" href="#_msocom_1" language="JavaScript" name="_msoanchor_1">[CS1]</a><![endif]> </span></span><i><span lang="EN-CA">or
the “Contract Co. option - </span></i><span lang="EN-CA">I would have thought this should read "additional/alternative option" not "a replacement for the ContractCo option". Another example is where it says "<i>There is not enough support for the Contract
Co. option at this time to allow the CWG to continue developing only this option."
</i></span><span lang="EN-CA">I don't recall this being a CWG conclusion - rather members/participants of the CWG proposed adding additional models/options which was welcomed. We need to be very careful in the phrasing.</span><span lang="EN-CA" style="font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"">
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